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Oh, Lord, Bring Back the Flattened Earth

Oh, lord, bring back the flattened earth
where lemmings took to flight
and foolish men dodged endless fate
by running straight ahead at night.
When the sun rose ‘round the edge
rose and set on every hedge
where nothing ever rolled away
the status quo was king
where silence was the canyons curse
and echoes didn’t sing.

Oh, lord, bring back the flattened earth
where time and tide stood still
and moonlight shone on the underside
of the fields flat earther’s till.
We must preserve this flattened view
as far as the eyes could see
lamenting but one simple flaw
there’s no place safe to pee
just cut a slice of the planet’s girth
and lord bring back the flattened earth.


John G. Lawless
©8/10/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fenn Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Funny John! Have a blessed day!
Cornish Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Magical & filled with messages the quick readers will miss - love your humor (with a wink)--perhaps we'd find a place to pee if we could find a tree...but perhaps that's indecent thinking! Love it
Laurie Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:39 PM
Hello John ... it might be a great idea to start again and hopefully learn from the mistakes - here's hoping John - Lindsay
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