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Oh Lonely Cloud

Oh. Lonely Cloud I am to venture as mass of cloud loaded with water vapor compressed dense dark about to burst. Me in deep dolor burdened with tears suppressed hidden under hard crust of heart I know the cloud to release its grief pouring showers. My pain pricking piercing heart condensed to freeze. Since long I loitered as aimless cloud. At last allowed frozen heart to melt letting teardrops to flow in flood. At end, my gloom to bloom moistened with beauty of sadness, as rain-soaked blossoms. 01/31/2020 Third Place 'One Poetic Line Inspiring Contest By Silent One

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Date: 2/3/2020 7:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Anisha :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2020 6:59:00 AM
a sad last few lines.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/2/2020 11:14:00 AM
Thanks n Blessing
Date: 1/31/2020 1:11:00 PM
Hello Anisha Dutta, oh a lovely poem. I like the last verseletting tear drops to flow in floods I love this line. Have a nice day my friend.
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