Anisha Dutta Poet Free verse

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01/31/20

Third place

One Poetic Line Inspiring 

Contest by Silent One

Oh Lonely Cloud

      I am to venture as mass of cloud
      loaded with water vapor compressed
     dense dark about to burst.
                                 
     Me in deep dolor
      burdened with tears suppressed
      hidden under hard crust of heart
   
    I know the cloud to release its grief pouring showers.
    My pain pricking piercing heart condensed to freeze.    
 
    Since long I loitered as aimless cloud.
    At last allowed frozen heart to melt
    letting teardrops to flow in flood.
    At end, my gloom to bloom moistened with beauty of sadness,
     as rain-soaked blossoms.

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2020 at 7:02 AM - Congratulations on your win, Anisha :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One February 2, 2020 at 6:59 AM a sad last few lines.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Anisha Dutta February 2, 2020 at 11:14 AM Thanks n Blessing

Darlene De Beaulieu January 31, 2020 at 1:11 PM Hello Anisha Dutta, oh a lovely poem. I like the last verseletting tear drops to flow in floods I love this line. Have a nice day my friend.