Oh Little Gnat

` Hovering like a gnat that finds a face irresistible Swatting frantically does no good as insects will be insects and annoying is part of their plan As it seems each day you find a new offering unfolding its wings, buzzing about with your dirty laundry in tow, as if poetry has become merely a tool to harass Finding little folders to slide into…highlighting each word of bin fodder, old but new hoping for accolades in lemonade fashion Funny how that works as hatred becomes the norm, never letting go of that scent that attracts you… whatever it is about the human aroma you find so pleasing Perhaps it is that it will never be you, oh little gnat of negative words seeking only attention, lost within the deep confines of a posers petals To ruin our summer fair, our poetic picnic in the sun cannot happen for you see we are happy in our own skin, with its wondrous fragrance…unlike you `
Don't you just hate little pests that just fly around annoying people?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/4/2019 8:56:00 AM
For sure! Amazing how “the gnats” can cause havoc. There is a poet with heart (many in fact) — that is you :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Yep, those little pest are sure annoying. : )
Date: 12/3/2019 9:07:00 PM
Very nattily penned, my friend! Just the right touch, for sure. Cheers, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much GW.
Date: 12/3/2019 5:59:00 PM
i don't know which gnat you are referring to, chris, but i hope he or she gets the message. you've written a very convincing argument in a very poetic way!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Ilene. There are many gnats around not sure which will read or not. : )
Date: 12/3/2019 3:00:00 PM
This is excellent Chris. A creative way to make this point. Yes, I do hate it. I also love the last stanza you wrote :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/3/2019 1:12:00 PM
Good one Chris :) I have been trying to overcome my very marked prejudices over those in the insect world and I am sure gnats must feed some of my fave pond fishes and pretty frogs etc but they can be really bothersome! In the bug-ridden tropics, there's all kinds! A good fire smokes them out but I am quite sure there is a herb out there yet to be found that would be the perfectly safe repellent for such...now to find it and patent it!! hehe
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2019 1:33:00 PM
Ha, let me know if you find that perfect repellent but make sure it works on big gnats too. : ) Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate you stopping by to inspect my insect problem. : )
Date: 12/3/2019 10:43:00 AM
i live near a creek and know all too well these annoying pests you speak of...hard to swat them down at times...perhaps persistence will win...love this Chris... :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandy. You would think the cold weather would make them go away but from what I have seen around here lately, that is not always the case. : )
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