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*Maya Angelou - "I know why the caged bird sings"

Oh, let us write of gentler things Still wondering why “the caged bird sings”* Or rise upon a thermal shaft Of feathers drawn upon first draft Or watch the sullied surf subside As clean-up crew of ocean’s pride Oh, let us dull the razor’s edge And loudly sign a silence pledge Deny the forest’s right to live While sharpening the traitor’s shiv Or are we but a single voice Muted by the rising noise Oh, let us cloak our metaphor In words both good and bad adore Hone it with sarcasm's wit So both sides will lay claim to it And chuckle as our pens run dry Our ink the tears that poets cry

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Date: 11/13/2023 6:13:00 PM
This is wonderful, John. A FAVE right away for me. Thanks!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/14/2023 4:09:00 AM
thanks Gershon I shall FAVE this FAVE in my FAVE CAVE.
Date: 11/13/2023 3:22:00 PM
a beautifully created couplet poem, John. I agree, let us write until our pens run dry. I love that powerful image. I also liked how you used poetic devices in your lines....nicely done! enjoy your evening, Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 11/14/2023 4:07:00 AM
Thanks Sara, occasionally I allow the couplets to run free, to dance, to to tickle the ivories of a smiling face
Date: 11/13/2023 1:36:00 PM
Excellent Couplet poetry, John. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Bill
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John Lawless
Date: 11/14/2023 4:05:00 AM
glad ya liked it Bill thanks for stopping by
Date: 11/13/2023 12:58:00 PM
well said John! I write John whatever springs to mind but as long as i am creative that's the main thing , it may be poop but if it makes folk smile I will keep going until my pen runs dry of its poetic diarhrea and becomes constipated forever lol:- hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/14/2023 4:04:00 AM
I doubt that will ever happen Jan as we poets are full of it at times......hehehee
Date: 11/13/2023 10:28:00 AM
This is excellent John. Great writing!
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2023 12:58:00 PM
agreed DT

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