Oh I'M Cursed So

Oh!  How he sauntered like a lord with his flaunt
The bluster and strut so nonchalant
The swank and sway blew me away
And swept me under the table like child's play!

My!  His handsome style
His arrogant modesty was no denial
He beamed as he jilted so tauntingly
Every female around was flibberty-jibberty

Cursed!  As he grabbed my eye balls out of their sockets
My heart in my throat-my stomach an empty pocket
While his prance in tight pants made me dance
Wishing for one real bona fide chance

So!  Afraid of the outcome of dealing with this situation
Argh!  "Get em up scout!" I'm cutting out
My courage is fading to total damnation
By this spellbound swagger sensational "knockout"!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Y. Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Hi Lonna, You painted a great scene with words. That was some fight! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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September 7, 2019 at 11:48 AM
This contest was a fun word experience for me. Thank you so much for your kind words. Lonna
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September 7, 2019 at 7:40 AM
I love your "my stomach an empty pocket" so descriptive. Congrats on your placement with your cute poem.
Blodgett Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Thanks Jeanne. I always enjoy your comments! Lonna
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