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Oh I'M Cursed So

Oh! How he sauntered like a lord with his flaunt The bluster and strut so nonchalant The swank and sway blew me away And swept me under the table like child's play! My! His handsome style His arrogant modesty was no denial He beamed as he jilted so tauntingly Every female around was flibberty-jibberty Cursed! As he grabbed my eye balls out of their sockets My heart in my throat-my stomach an empty pocket While his prance in tight pants made me dance Wishing for one real bona fide chance So! Afraid of the outcome of dealing with this situation Argh! "Get em up scout!" I'm cutting out My courage is fading to total damnation By this spellbound swagger sensational "knockout"!!

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Date: 9/7/2019 8:26:00 AM
Hi Lonna, You painted a great scene with words. That was some fight! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/7/2019 11:48:00 AM
This contest was a fun word experience for me. Thank you so much for your kind words. Lonna
Date: 9/7/2019 7:40:00 AM
I love your "my stomach an empty pocket" so descriptive. Congrats on your placement with your cute poem.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 9/7/2019 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Jeanne. I always enjoy your comments! Lonna

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