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Dedicated to my writing partner Darren Watson. We wrote about thirty poems together as 'Jadazzle United' unfortunately he got sick and disappeared from soup. About a year later we wrote together briefly but now I no longer have contact with him or his family

Oh How I Miss You

We wrote together You became a cherished friend Then there was complete silence Unfinished poems Remain on my computer I miss you so much my friend Collaboration We always had so much fun You are often in my thoughts I visit our page Those poems remain forever Such treasured memories Oh How I miss you Contest Sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer 08-23-17
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Breedt Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Hi Jan , i am sorry for your loss. I also miss Cay Cay too
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:03 AM
I hope they both return I miss caycay too. i will mail her and see what's going on... I guess life issues take hold and family is far more important than soup:-( hugs jan xx
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August 27, 2017 at 9:28 AM
shame hope he returns to pen more poems
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 2:41 PM
It would be wonderful as we used to have such fun Stephen:-)hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Coming back with congrats.
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Agnes:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Congrats, Jan!
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 2:18 AM
Thanks Vijay:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Very touching and beautiful, Jan - love it! Congrats, my friend! :-)
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 2:18 AM
Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:46 PM
It is sad to lose a friend.
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 2:19 AM
He brought a lot of fun to the site and was a lovely friend to many here on soup:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations Jan :)
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 2:19 AM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Leachet Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:27 PM
This was beautiful :)
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:30 PM
Thanks Tatianna we used to have such fun - who knows one day we may write again and finish the poems we started:-0 hugs Jan xx
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August 24, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Jan there's Cas, Tim, Andrea and you. Your happiness is paramount to me. I miss the old soup. So many poets on here that gave me joy. If only we could have ignored the bad news bears and just enjoyed the special relations a large group of us had. I do miss you my beautiful friend...A TON! Love always armand.
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 11:06 AM
I wish we could turn back time Armand and go back to the fun we used to have. Things change and not always for the better The environment then was much more a safe haven for many of us than it is now and its sad to see so many no longer on soup:-( hugs jan xx
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August 24, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Hi Jan, i know how much you did enjoy doing your collaborations with Darren. I enjoyed the poems that i did read. An excellent poem for the contest. I wish you all the best in the contest. A wonderful write for your writing partner Jan. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Mike writing with Darren was very special and I will never mind anyone else who is on the same wavelength as we were. I know you collaborate often and when you find that special person it really is golden:-) hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 9:04 AM
I know how much you cherished your partnership and friendship. Great job my dear lovely Jan! A Fav.
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Oh Armand do you remember the fun we used to have when we first started ... I miss those happy days:-( hugs jan xx
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August 24, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Hugs Jan, tenderness xomo
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Mo we had such fun when we wrote together:-) hugs jan xx
Bell Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:10 AM
Beautiful memories expressed about a friend and poetic too - well done Jan
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 3:18 AM
Thanks Michael - he always used to say he was proud of me with the way i had taken to writing (I was a total novice when I joined soup in fact I hated poetry at school and it wasn't until my hubby had cancer surgery in 2013 that started to write) I am sure he would smile if he saw me write a Sedoka about him, its only the second time I've written this form:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 23, 2017 at 8:21 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your friend, Jan. Writing together brings people very close. I am sorry you no longer have him in your life.
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 2:23 AM
We shared a silly sense of humour andhad such fun writing Agnes :-) His poetry is still on his pages as is our Jadazzle account and I recently saw his name on someone's favourite poets list and the person who favourited him is a relatively new member:-) hugs jan xx
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August 23, 2017 at 3:05 PM
wonderful heart you have Jan, wonderful poetry also...
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Thanks Harry, I used to have such fun writing with Darren we were amazing friends which lead some people to think there was more to Jadazzle that just poetry which really made us giggle and so it spurred us on to write even more lol:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Full of emotions--lovely story--well done, Jan--good luck for the contest!
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Thanks Vijay:-) hugs jan xx
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August 23, 2017 at 1:11 PM
Jan, friends are just so important to our lives. This is a lovely tribute>
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Darren influenced my life in so many ways especially supporting me with issues in my life away from poetry:-) hugs jan xx
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August 23, 2017 at 1:08 PM
jan, a tender offering for darren... i was witness to this inimitable poetic team-up!...i hope he reads this.. huggs
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Oh we used to giggle Nette I know he used to bring a lot of fun to soup:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:04 AM
I wonder if he ever thinks of poetry anymore Jan. He is a talented writer and I loved Jadazzle
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:09 AM
I don't know Tim, his last poem posted on his page was a real change in direction to his usual style I just hope he is ok and i have wonderful memories of the fun we used to have when we wrote our poems:-) I was looking through another poet's favourite poets list and saw his name on the list which made me smile as she joined in 2016 and he's not been active since 2015 so its great his poems are still being appreciated as you say he was a great poet and I learned so much writing with him... he would often say how proud he was of me which spurred me on with my writing:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 23, 2017 at 8:46 AM
This is very nice in tribute to your friend, Jan,,, Friends that can be there for you forever... but sad with internet you never know what happens on the other end to a person that you really have never seen .... Hugs ~*
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Oh so true Eve we had such an amazing friendship I do hope that he is ok. :-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:17 AM
So sad when people leave. Very sad.
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Yes it is sad when they just disappear Kim but with some detective work I managed to trace one of his relations:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Hold on to those special memories Jan...
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Our poems will always be there Charlie it was a wonderful time for me as a new poet and Darren took me under his wing and I flourished so much in so many aspects of my life and i loved him as a very special friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 23, 2017 at 8:03 AM
- It makes me sad to think about, Jan ... I understand very well that you miss him - Lovely poem - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:06 AM
We started an epic poem about the isle of Man TT races and there is another one about Cinderella and the ugly sisters. they will never get finished:-( hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:04 AM
It makes me sad but when i read out poems and poems on his page it makes me smile as we had such fun together:-0 hugs jan xx
Sivey Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Wow, you got all the syllables correct within this elaborate write, I really loved reading this creative and enlightening poem this morning! You have impressed upon me a terrific piece, with such a powerful message of the loss of a friendship and the missing of the conception of poetry! What a beautiful piece, Great Work!!
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:04 AM
We became such close friends Russell and the e mails would fly between us and at one time we had 16 different emails on different subjects to respond to in one day it was crazy lol - The first stanza in our initial collaboration had changes but after only about 6 words were altered in about 30 poems. We were on the same wavelength and collaborating with him was a joy and I will never find anyone to replace him as a collaborative partner:-) hugs jan xx
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