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Oh How I Miss the Butterflies

~ Beyond the chipped paint and tarnished handle of this old screen door once waited a garden, a winding path of stone and dirt I had walked many times in my life that led to a place of wondrous beauty, poetic blooms and intoxicating fragrances Merely stepping beneath the Jasmine covered arbor lifted spirits and illumined hope that all was right, and the butterflies, oh the butterflies, winged effervescence in sapphire, indigo, tangerine and lemon butter yellows floated from flower to flower creating the most wonderful dancing rainbow for the eye I still smile when I hear those old rusted hinges squeak and I feel that fresh air meet my face For those memories linger in my mind, as now I find the path overgrown, the arbor splintered and fallen, the vibrant garden a mass of weed and vine strangling the beauty that once flourished And I understand, life changes…slowly, each of us deteriorate within time’s grasp, returning to where we began, covered in lawn and dew beginning anew or to be forgotten… an occasional thought that passes down another path of another life Now as I stand gazing at what once was, a tear finds my cheek, meandering over these wrinkles gathering in the corner of my mouth…salty yet it is not the garden nor the whimsical path that collects in my mind…it is the butterflies, oh how I miss the butterflies… ~
An older piece but I figured since it seemed to be butterfly day around here, I’d post it. : )

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Date: 10/10/2019 11:30:00 AM
Back to FAV this, cause I kept thinking about it.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 12:02:00 PM
Wow, thanks so much. That is a huge compliment. I am humbled by this.
Date: 10/3/2019 10:23:00 AM
A bittersweet epitaph for a garden remembered. You've captured its former glory so well. Captivating read my friend. My heart smiles for the reading.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Debra. I am happy you liked this one so much. Anytime I can make someone's heart smile is a good day for me.
Date: 10/3/2019 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Butterfly Day what a splendid idea!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 9:38:00 AM
Thanks so much P.S. I am happy you liked this one. I appreciate your visit and comment today.
Date: 10/2/2019 10:21:00 PM
This is certainly a fave. I absolutely love this. You wrote an enchanted poem that speaks to my very core. I so love it. God bless you always
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Regina, you are so kind. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 10/2/2019 6:24:00 PM
you paint such a beautiful picture and yet again take us on that journey through your words... this is gorgeous even with the poignancy ...i could see those flowers being choked by the weeds...i could hear the door creek, and see the chipping paint... excellent penning my friend :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I am thrilled you enjoyed this older piece. I thought it appropriate with all of the butterfly poems being posted today(yesterday). I especially loved yours.
Date: 10/2/2019 6:01:00 PM
Perfect for today this bittersweet butterfly beauty ~ stunnning imagery, my friend, and wonderfully written!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you my friend for all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 10/2/2019 5:36:00 PM
It sure is butterfly day around here today and your poem is wonderful Chris. Good choice and beautifully written! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I am so happy you liked this one

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