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Oh, Go Away Yesterday

I hear her laughter in the rain I see her smiling once again As emotions take me down memory lane, OH, go away yesterday Just leave me breathless I implore As I walk the sandy shore But she is here no more, OH, go away yesterday From my heart a piece was hewn As she departed to heaven's tune Was it destiny, she left so soon, OH, go away yesterday Must these memories be forsaken now And leave this sadness on my brow I sit in silence, my head I bow, OH, go away yesterday 5-7-18 Contest: Rhyme and Refrain Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:32:00 PM
Great emotion. Well done, Joseph.
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Date: 5/19/2018 8:11:00 AM
Very sad Joseph. Nice write.
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Date: 5/15/2018 5:19:00 PM
Simply wonderful, JOseph. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/15/2018 2:45:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad poem, well done ~
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Joseph May
Date: 5/15/2018 5:18:00 PM
Thank you for my placement BW
Date: 5/14/2018 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Joseph :)
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Date: 5/14/2018 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this poem of memories. Well done!
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Date: 5/14/2018 3:47:00 PM
This is a magnificent piece with flawless rhyming scheme and smooth flow! Congratulations on your win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/10/2018 1:31:00 PM
Excellent--very moving, Joseph! Janice
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Date: 5/9/2018 6:17:00 AM
Excellent and perfect write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/7/2018 3:16:00 PM
Memories of love are always bittersweet, are they not? Wonderfully portrayed in this sad poem, Joseph.
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:52:00 AM
Wow Joseph. This is just perfect. ! Good luck in the contest, it should do well :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 10:58:00 AM
such an arresting piece so well crafted despite the sad tone... enjoyed it lots, joseph.. huggs
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:42:00 AM
Perfectly rendered..excellent rhyme and refrain..a joy to read. A must win poem!
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Date: 5/7/2018 6:53:00 AM
That is so good!!! Excellent job, should do well! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
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