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Oh, Go Away Yesterday

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I looked into your eyes and saw a tear, frightened; I wasn't sure what words I'd hear. And the emotions felt were hope and fear. Oh, go away yesterday! You once swore destiny had chosen us, but now, there are doubts we need to discuss. What was to last forever ended thus. Oh, go away yesterday! Yesterday was the end of forever, unraveling bonds time chose to sever. And tomorrow, you'll be gone wherever. Oh, go away yesterday! An emptiness shrivels my hollowed heart, watching all my dreams and wishes depart. And I bleed where your words tore me apart. Oh, go away yesterday!

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James Inman

Date: 5/15/2018 7:40:00 PM

Emile, you have written a sad emotive piece.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so much James, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 5/15/2018 2:29:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent poem, well done ~

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/15/2018 3:42:00 PM

Thank you Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/14/2018 4:12:00 PM

Oh my! Congratulations on your win. This is a fave for me. Written so emotionally expressive you can feel it.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2018 7:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 5/14/2018 2:46:00 PM

How does one say anything that could have a greater meaning than 'Congratulations'? If the English language had a word more fitting, I would use it.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2018 7:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Curtis, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2018 12:39:00 PM

Heart wrenching! The sadness, deep in the belly! And you leave us feeling empty. I think you could win this one! GL!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/2/2018 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/1/2018 4:01:00 PM

Well written and expressed Emile! Good luck in the contest :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/1/2018 7:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Heidi, I enjoy your visits my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/30/2018 6:18:00 PM

Beautiful, Emile. I love the form you chose for delivering this heartfelt and endearing poem.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/1/2018 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Line, I always enjoy your visits my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/30/2018 4:52:00 PM

Bravo Emile you've nailed it with this emotional poem, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2018 5:24:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan, I always enjoy your visits my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/30/2018 12:36:00 PM

Hello Emile,sometimes our tears will appear, for no reason at all,and we will cry. This happened to me today,and i do not know why. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/1/2018 8:34:00 PM

Yes I do feel better now. Thank you my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2018 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, I hope you are feeling better my friend, Emile.