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Oh Fate

OH FATE Oh fate, I beseech The, Thy hermetically sealed lips for once to loose For the enchanting murmur of my destiny’s voice to hear Revealing the well kept secrets that time so masterfully has weaved With the unfailing threads of my unyielding karma! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 SEPTEMBER 2013

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Wayne Hill

Date: 9/14/2013 8:08:00 AM

unfailing threads of my unyielding karma! a brilliant line if I have ever read one. You are a true wordsmith.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/14/2013 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Wayne, for your magnanimous comment!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2013 4:22:00 AM

Very expressive work that you have penned ..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/13/2013 4:27:00 AM

Oh, Sara I am so sorry for - I do not know how- my comment for Eilleen is posted here. I think you do not mind for we are all friends! Now I would like to thank you for your visit and your encouraging comment it is so kind of you!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/13/2013 4:22:00 AM

My dearest, Eileen, who would disagree that our destiny is in God's hands? God however works in mysterious ways and you ought to know that! Someone to believe it or not doesn't make any difference it is like gravity that was operating for billions of years even though humans were oblivious to it! Have a wonderful trip to Cyprus! Thank you and God may watch over you as always!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/13/2013 4:05:00 AM

Kali sou mera, Demetri mou. Oraia...all, kseris ti?....then berazi...afou kseris..then pestepso eparxie karam...Good morning, my dear poet. Your destiny, like that of all humanity, is in the hands of God. Have a wonderful day!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/13/2013 4:23:00 AM

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2013 3:56:00 AM

I agree One's Karma makes the fate

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/13/2013 4:29:00 AM

My dear Dr. Ram, I am happy we are in agreement here! Thank you!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/13/2013 3:41:00 AM

Wow suxh perfection within your lines of this amazing write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this glorious poem here this morning Demetrios! What a brilliant piece, such a masterful poem...I love the use of the word Karma, it fits in perfectly within your verse, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/13/2013 4:31:00 AM

Russell my friend, it is always a joy to read your always generous comments, thank you for your kindness!