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Oh Edith Love, Refuse Me Not

A Sonnet Without A Usage, Doth not this piercing soul go down with timeless songs unsung by you? Besmirched like coal this old clown feels singed, moreover feeling blue Fork the mile come to my rescue deliver joy to me beloved one Suitor of my core, I love you more then time more than sun Nucleus of my dreams come hither for this old buffoon needs your smile you know he wishes not to wither seared but un-scorched he is defiled Oh Edith love, refuse me not this old fool still thinks your hot! not for contest

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Date: 4/15/2024 4:44:00 PM
such a clever sonnet minus the 'a's....I loved the humor, especially 'old buffoon.' Best wishes with the contest, dear Rose, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:34:00 PM
I didn't put it in the contest, cuz its not about spring lol, I might try one tomorrow, thanks for reading Sara

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