Oh Dear, Be Mine

Residing in the cave of my heart
            only one desire sits in this holy spot, 
            my heart’s rib cage holds this intact  
            a fact not known to my sweetheart,
            never has a moment gone without 
            thinking of my beloved, this Love beat
            is my heart’s sacred song I have got, 
            can she be mine before I depart?


      17-Feb-2018
      Sponsored by: John Hamilton
      Romantic-Acrostic - Poetry Contest
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Allison Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 5:18 AM
a very lovely acrostic, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 5:18 AM
a very lovely acrostic, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments, Sathya, and congrats on your well deserved win.
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sathya, beautiful verse. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Congrats on your eloquent acrostic. Fine win, Sathya.
Babu Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Thanks Line.:-) Regards,Sathya
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Beautiful write Sathya, truly a marvelous write, enjoyed immensely, congrats on a winning placement!
Babu Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Thanks John. I enjoyed participating in the contest. Regards, Sathya
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