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Oh Daddy

Oh Daddy, please don’t hit! I’ll be quiet while you watch your game You forget to unclench your fist And swear at me not knowing my name Oh Daddy, how you hated Your words cut like jagged glass Even when you weren’t drinking We’d get the leather sash Oh Daddy, I hear you’re sick You should confess it all But you go on denying what you’ve done Even though it’s too late to take the fall Oh Daddy, now that you’re dying You still won’t face the truth That you are an evil, demented man And your kids’ sufferings are the proof Oh Daddy, look you’re dead You left countless victims behind My eulogy for you is simple: “The world doesn’t need any more of his kind”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/3/2014 12:15:00 PM
breaks my heart. well written. all the best. lots of love.
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/3/2014 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Maurice for reading and commenting. :-)Christine
Date: 9/3/2014 11:29:00 AM
Oh Dear...this is so sad, Christine. How many know of abuse and don't do anything about it. This is a powerful write. I'm moved....There is a judgment day. God sees it all. Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2014 1:05:00 PM
My hugs to you, my dear. I hope you don't mind, but I mentioned your poems in my blog. I hope some people come to read these poems. They are so good!
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/3/2014 12:05:00 PM
Eileen- Thanks for reading my poem--I was feeling like retribution was in order when I wrote it-and I agree there is judgement day. Christine

Book: Shattered Sighs