Oh Charlie, That Spoiled Doberman

Charley was being obnoxious so I took away his hedgehog, it’s such a small toy anyways for a big Doberman dog. A spoiled rotten boy who whined for an hour or so hoping to get his way and that hedgehog I’d throw. I wondered inside just how long could Charley go? Little terror who’s not so little since he was a pup, still my favorite handsome boy who’d always act up. Three years old and still behaving like a punk child, an innocent boy in the morning, at night a devil wild. No matter how out of control he acted, I still smiled. Charley was looking out the front room sill one day, saw a Maltese walking but to him looked like a prey. So he trampled through the window and ran ahead right up to the little girl to smell her behind and head. Funny how a rough and tough boy can be gentle instead. See there’s nothing as sweet as a Doberman Pinscher, even though he may not have the longest softest fur. But Charley has a heart of gold even when acting mighty, and gives slobbery kisses when he says nightie-nightie. Eventually I gave him his hedgehog…he still acted flighty. So give your doggie a kiss today and love it in every way- you never know when your fur-angel will bark and fly away. I chose: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O83lmO1lNDc Doberman Pinscher Contest Edward Ibeh August 13, 2018
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 6:58 PM
How sweet, and made even sweeter by your wonderful first place win Luloo! Congratulations!
Gentry Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Cute stories, fun read. Well done!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:25 PM
what a cute poem LuLoo many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Wonderful entry, Laura Loo! CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Ibeh Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Laura!:-) Very well-written and a delightful read. Congratulations on your top win!
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Laura.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:52 PM
Laura, beautifully done. I looked at this contest and said "not for me. Too difficult." You, my friend, have nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
Wanter Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:10 PM
I love dogs. Really enjoyed this. My little Annie is 11 and blind. She gets her way - she has my heart.
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