Oh Carol

On Christmas Eve, Oh Carol! Put on risqué apparel - Santa and elves in eyeball thwack, A little drummer boy in shock! December 26, 2021
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Alex Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:51 PM
"drummer boy in shock!" - Beautiful scene-making. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Delightful humor ~
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 9:46 AM
this is so fun and risque. Love it!!
Kitchin Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Margarita, congratulations on your winning placement, this made me laugh!
Gondolf Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 6:56 AM
"Oh Carol, put on your risqué apparel" I like that! Nicely written, Maggie. Hugs, John
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:16 AM
You're adding a possessive pronoun to a risque, my friend:) xoxo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Oh Carol…Carol..tch..tch (wagging finger) LOL
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:16 AM
:) M.
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