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Oh Bring me Back

You bring me back, back to you gently moving me, opening the eyes of my heart. And when I look, look away to focus on this twisted world you bring me back, gently back opening the eyes of my heart, when I look away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/27/2015 1:28:00 AM
HighWave, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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HighWave Brian
Date: 6/27/2015 9:24:00 PM
Many thanks for noticing. Hope to get back to writing soon.
Date: 6/15/2015 11:05:00 AM
This is nicely, sensitively done. It has a wonderful flow. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 5/20/2015 7:19:00 PM
Brian, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/21/2015 9:50:00 AM
Much appreciated Linda! Hopefully I will add more to my list.
Date: 5/20/2015 5:33:00 PM
Brian, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2015 12:42:00 PM
What an interesting poem to introduced yourself poetrysoup.......excellent Write............);Afolabi.
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HighWave Brian
Date: 5/21/2015 9:54:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my works.
Date: 5/20/2015 11:27:00 AM
Brian, Welcome to the site! I have read all three of your pieces and find you to be a mature writer with consistently good work in a variety of styles. I will definitely be coming back to read more. I like that this one expresses your faith, but you have no need to specifically mention it...it's so ingrained that it just is. That is a wonderful thing!~Jan
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Date: 5/20/2015 1:41:00 PM
Again, thankyou. I don't find much time to write poetry nor my painting (I have 8 children) but it is enough for now.