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Oh, blue, blue sky that used to be, Before those grey lines bled, Has evil now taken over the World, Are all the good men dead?

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Date: 8/24/2024 1:35:00 AM
oh the goodness of humanity was bombed long ago. bleeding red, evil rules. lovely poem dear poet, thought-provoking.
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Clive Blake
Date: 10/25/2024 4:31:00 AM
Hi and thanks for commenting. Unfortunately, I have to agree with you, evil does rule! But we are the many and they are the few, so on that basis, I hope change can come!

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