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Oh, Death

Remembering still shadows of yesterday O, the grieving O, dripping sadness holding a wilting rose in my cemetery garden in quiet she reposes beneath the maple trees the bare branches whispering . . . breaking my heart dark decay . . . a la memoire I will fold my petals, now under this weeping willow I wait . . . mother within your arms my battered soul ____________________ June 13, 2017 Verse/Oh, Death Copyright Protected, ID 909651 For the contest, Best Titles Sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 6/20/2017 4:39:00 AM
Wow...such a poignant poem and so beautifully written. It consumes me. Congrats on your win B.W.
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:18:00 PM
Beautifully splendid piece of art that defines you, Constance:) congratulations on your first place win:)
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Date: 6/19/2017 10:41:00 PM
congrats on the win... well composed piece of work...
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Date: 6/19/2017 9:29:00 PM
Exquisite Constance! Congratulations on your first placement! : )
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Date: 6/19/2017 3:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2017 5:37:00 PM
It is exactly YOUR kind of poem and it's wonderful and sad. Have you seen what some poets are coming up with? I love how their titles they choose reflects their typical writing patterns!
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Date: 6/14/2017 4:20:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings , this is a powerful piece of write , looking forward to seeing the second half :)))hugs
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Date: 6/14/2017 11:09:00 AM
Glad you are back! From Carol, Hubby, Dragon, and the Menagerie.
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Date: 6/14/2017 10:22:00 AM
Nice job with this tough assignment. I didn't even know how to approach it. Good luck in the contest. "Still working on my poem" -- Love it!
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Date: 6/14/2017 8:47:00 AM
A beautiful start Constance - take it easy my friend - you are in my thoughts for a speedy recovery:-) hugs Jan xx
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