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Oh, Christmas Tree

~*~*~ 'Twas the night before Christmas when Mom said, to Dad- go get a tree for us better than last year; remember how by Christmas morning it was dead, she shouted instructions as Dad put the car in gear. He looked at me with a sigh- oh don't you worry, we will buy the best and biggest tree on the lot; and will search their complete tree lot inventory, we will find the very best Xmas tree ever bought. Well, we did find the best and biggest tree ever, on the drive home- off the roof it started to slip; and I said to Dad, it's great but just a bit big however, deck the halls, he sang, it just needs a little snip. He turned it this way and that but it did not fit, in the front door- don't worry he said and got a saw; I was really, really doubtful I had to admit, he was hacking at the branches as I watched in awe. Well, somehow we finally got the tree in the living room, but it was too tall and the top was crunched on the ceiling; at this point, I was filled with a great gloom and doom, when Dad sawed the top off- I had a real sinking feeling. But he stood back looking and feeling pretty darn proud, when Mom came into the room- and screamed; this tree is the worst yet, she was yelling really loud, so, I ran out of the room 'cause she was so steamed. Where am I suppose to put my Christmas angel ? Dad, (the top was flat and there were branches gone leaving gaps); she stood there sort of bewildered and boy was she mad, and not just that the tree looked awful- it began to collapse. (Dad, tied it to the wall- so it would not fall) We decorated the tree anyways but by Christmas morning; not a thistle was left- just a bare tree with decorations adorning. ____________________________ November 27, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Oh, Christmas Tree Copyright Protected, ID 19-1202-170-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest The Night Before 2 sponsor, Joseph May Third Place
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Date: 12/15/2019 3:26:00 PM
Dear Heart, normally you do not write with meter and rhyme very often, but wow, you really pulled this off VERY well. I am impressed. Also this reminded me of something like out of the movie A Christmas Story (have you seen it? It's so funny) Congrats on your win. And thanks for my Xmas win.
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:10:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats and compliment on my poem, happy you liked it. This is written from life, my dad was a character that always left us laughing ~
Date: 12/15/2019 8:11:00 AM
Nicely done DH, Congrats on your win..
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:45:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 12/14/2019 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:45:00 AM
Greg, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 12/14/2019 12:20:00 PM
OMG - sounds like it really happened. That really be a shock and something to laugh about for years. The fondest memories are made of such misadventures. Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2019 10:46:00 AM
Line, thanks for the congrats, it really did happen !
Date: 11/26/2019 8:55:00 PM
lol...yeah i penned about 5 lines, didn't like it and deleted it...sigh... this made me laugh though so thank you :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 11:16:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for visiting, this really happened, my Dad was such a character, when I think of him, I have to laugh, Christmas was never the same after he left for Heaven !
Date: 11/25/2019 4:49:00 PM
Lol good luck Constance. and all through the house not a girl was sleeping for she was thinking of a poem. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 11:17:00 AM
Greg, thanks for visiting, oh true, your night writer is not sleeping but writing and writing !
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