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Oft Living Alone

oft living alone
he lost the talent for talk
Dad's eyes spoke volumes

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 5, 2012 at 5:39 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Debbie. Love, Carol

October 4, 2012 at 8:39 AM

Very familiar with the eyes of solitude, Deb..powerful senryu with a sensitive depth. Congrats!! gwendolen

October 2, 2012 at 10:39 PM

Lovely Deb. Many congrats for this win.

Poet Destroyer A

October 2, 2012 at 1:18 PM

Debbie, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD

October 2, 2012 at 12:43 PM

Congratulations Debbie. Love, joyce

Irfana Ali Bhat

October 2, 2012 at 8:09 AM

these words say so much....congrats on ur win...:)))

October 2, 2012 at 6:37 AM

Congratulations Debi on your 1st place win with this great senryu.

Apoorva Patrikar

October 1, 2012 at 10:38 PM

congratulations... well deserved win

October 1, 2012 at 9:12 PM

Well done, and isn't it so true of our elders. congratulations on your win. Lee

Bukang Liwayway

October 1, 2012 at 8:20 PM

congratulations on your winning friend Debbie :) cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!

October 1, 2012 at 5:56 PM

Congratulations on your winning senryu.

October 1, 2012 at 4:45 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

October 1, 2012 at 3:33 PM

Ahh Deb...I can relate...well deserved win cher...and by the way, to quote you directly...hummmmm!... Ain't heard a peep outta' you lately!...Have pity on a poor old man would ya? (I'm gonna' go pout now) - Tim

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2012 at 2:14 PM

Nicely done, nicely won!! congratulations.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

October 1, 2012 at 1:12 PM

More congratulations Debbie xx

Kathryn Collins

September 30, 2012 at 7:23 AM

Debbie - so much emotion and sadness are packed in these three wonderful lines. Kathy

Phyllis Babcock

September 28, 2012 at 1:41 PM

Nicely done with this fine senryu Deb. soup mail love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2012 at 6:30 PM

ahhhh, ME LIKES

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