Offering of Pansy

OFFERING OF PANSY Plucked at peak season, her blossom’s open - Cleo, short for Cleopatra – brunette. Her bloomer’s heart, displayed, shows she’s hope’n. Hands him a pink pansy – eyes haven’t met. Whistling inside, collar tight, he’s grope’n, With fright. Cleo’s bold and brash, wide open! 2/1/2017
Laura Loo's A Rhyme In 60
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Inman Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 7:27 AM
A Pansy will get you in trouble every time Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Too funny!
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:53 PM
a very clever poem, Kim. I like it a lot. Congrats for your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! :)
Schroeder Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:04 PM
I feel the emotional encounter.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Thank you!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Hi Kim, Very fun and congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Paulette!
Burch Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations Kim!!!:) big Hugggs!! Deb!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Thanks so much! Hugs :)
Green Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Definitely sensual and absolutely beautiful Kim. Really nicely penned my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thank you, Chris! i had fun writing it. Again, from a painting I own. I have not figured out how to post photos on this sight and especially personal ones.
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