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Off With Their Heads

I look into some people's faces, And wonder what they see All my flaws and deep disgraces Shown outside of me? Peace is just my sole intention- To murder Troubles met "Truth" is such an old invention That white and black reflect (Like shadows on a silhouette)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Robin Davis
Date: 11/8/2013 7:35:00 PM
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Chan You scared me with the poem title. I thought you were going murderous on me. LOL This is a creative and imaginative write. Nice rhyme and flow. Thanks for the comment on my Turkey Fun poem. sorry I made you hungry. Hugs and love Sweet Pea
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:41:00 AM
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Thanks for the kind words, Sweet Pea! <3
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/29/2013 9:22:00 PM
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Gotta love the Rose Queen! You know I don't think we ever did find out who was doing the chopping did we? Light & Love
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/30/2013 5:02:00 AM
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I suppose not. An actual review would have been helpful, though; thanks
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 9/13/2013 7:43:00 PM
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Wow, Excellent write.
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/14/2013 10:50:00 AM
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Thanks, Jon; I appreciate your kind words :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 8:24:00 AM
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amazing depth need i say more
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/29/2013 8:42:00 AM
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Your compliment is greatly appreciated, Danesh :)
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Lori Hopkins
Date: 8/22/2013 8:11:00 PM
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i love it, "peaces sole intention to murder troubles met"... indeed!
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/22/2013 8:52:00 PM
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Thanks, Lori; I'm glad you enjoyed that line. I appreciate you dropping by and for reading and replying :)

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