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Off With Their Heads

I look into some people's faces,
And wonder what they see
All my flaws and deep disgraces
Shown outside of me?
Peace is just my sole intention-
To murder Troubles met
"Truth" is such an old invention
That white and black reflect
(Like shadows on a silhouette)

Copyright © Just That Archaic Poet | Year Posted 2013

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Robin Davis Date: 11/8/2013 7:35:00 PM Chan You scared me with the poem title. I thought you were going murderous on me. LOL This is a creative and imaginative write. Nice rhyme and flow. Thanks for the comment on my Turkey Fun poem. sorry I made you hungry. Hugs and love Sweet Pea Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/9/2013 5:41:00 AM Thanks for the kind words, Sweet Pea! <3

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/29/2013 9:22:00 PM Gotta love the Rose Queen! You know I don't think we ever did find out who was doing the chopping did we? Light & Love Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/30/2013 5:02:00 AM I suppose not. An actual review would have been helpful, though; thanks

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 9/13/2013 7:43:00 PM Wow, Excellent write. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/14/2013 10:50:00 AM Thanks, Jon; I appreciate your kind words :)

Danesh Morgan Date: 8/29/2013 8:24:00 AM amazing depth need i say more Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/29/2013 8:42:00 AM Your compliment is greatly appreciated, Danesh :)

Lori Hopkins Date: 8/22/2013 8:11:00 PM i love it, "peaces sole intention to murder troubles met"... indeed! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/22/2013 8:52:00 PM Thanks, Lori; I'm glad you enjoyed that line. I appreciate you dropping by and for reading and replying :)