Get Your Premium Membership

Off With Their Heads

I look into some people's faces, And wonder what they see All my flaws and deep disgraces Shown outside of me? Peace is just my sole intention- To murder Troubles met "Truth" is such an old invention That white and black reflect (Like shadows on a silhouette)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/8/2013 7:35:00 PM
Chan You scared me with the poem title. I thought you were going murderous on me. LOL This is a creative and imaginative write. Nice rhyme and flow. Thanks for the comment on my Turkey Fun poem. sorry I made you hungry. Hugs and love Sweet Pea
Login to Reply
That Archaic Poet Avatar
Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:41:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Sweet Pea! <3
Date: 10/29/2013 9:22:00 PM
Gotta love the Rose Queen! You know I don't think we ever did find out who was doing the chopping did we? Light & Love
Login to Reply
That Archaic Poet Avatar
Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/30/2013 5:02:00 AM
I suppose not. An actual review would have been helpful, though; thanks
Date: 9/13/2013 7:43:00 PM
Wow, Excellent write.
Login to Reply
That Archaic Poet Avatar
Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/14/2013 10:50:00 AM
Thanks, Jon; I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 8/29/2013 8:24:00 AM
amazing depth need i say more
Login to Reply
That Archaic Poet Avatar
Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/29/2013 8:42:00 AM
Your compliment is greatly appreciated, Danesh :)
Date: 8/22/2013 8:11:00 PM
i love it, "peaces sole intention to murder troubles met"... indeed!
Login to Reply
That Archaic Poet Avatar
Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/22/2013 8:52:00 PM
Thanks, Lori; I'm glad you enjoyed that line. I appreciate you dropping by and for reading and replying :)

Book: Shattered Sighs