Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Off With Their Heads

I look into some people's faces,
And wonder what they see
All my flaws and deep disgraces
Shown outside of me?
Peace is just my sole intention-
To murder Troubles met
"Truth" is such an old invention
That white and black reflect
(Like shadows on a silhouette)

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Robin Davis November 8, 2013 at 7:35 PM Chan You scared me with the poem title. I thought you were going murderous on me. LOL This is a creative and imaginative write. Nice rhyme and flow. Thanks for the comment on my Turkey Fun poem. sorry I made you hungry. Hugs and love Sweet Pea Just That Archaic Poet November 9, 2013 at 5:41 AM Thanks for the kind words, Sweet Pea! <3

Debbie Guzzi October 29, 2013 at 9:22 PM Gotta love the Rose Queen! You know I don't think we ever did find out who was doing the chopping did we? Light & Love Just That Archaic Poet October 30, 2013 at 5:02 AM I suppose not. An actual review would have been helpful, though; thanks

Jon A Cavanaugh September 13, 2013 at 7:43 PM Wow, Excellent write. Just That Archaic Poet September 14, 2013 at 10:50 AM Thanks, Jon; I appreciate your kind words :)

Danesh Morgan August 29, 2013 at 8:24 AM amazing depth need i say more Just That Archaic Poet August 29, 2013 at 8:42 AM Your compliment is greatly appreciated, Danesh :)

Lori Hopkins August 22, 2013 at 8:11 PM i love it, "peaces sole intention to murder troubles met"... indeed! Just That Archaic Poet August 22, 2013 at 8:52 PM Thanks, Lori; I'm glad you enjoyed that line. I appreciate you dropping by and for reading and replying :)