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Off the Chain

It’s a hot commodity, seems as if everybody gotta have it Possessing something that gives such elevated status is a coveted thing Desired for the inordinate attention it bring Ownership of something that raises the personal profile to such gaudy heights is a top priority: Acquisition of property for consumer vanity police Proceed to charge it and retain, if it’s off the chain Round up the Usual Suspects dot.com gang, if it’s off the chain It’s can’t-get-enough of it merchandise type stuff, looks like nobody can do without it ... from pillow to puff Linen to makeup, brush on the checkbook blush Get in on the cable premium package gold rush But my message of materialism chastity is clear: Listen up, my fellow disciples of truth, and those who will hear — Don’t buy into the noisy commodity market fear, dip not your hand into the savings slush Turn down the volume ... raise the decibels of the hush Not owning something that puts you in another social stratosphere, will send you to the bottom of the popularity heap ... do I make myself clear Is the message getting thru the carnival barker wax plugging your ear Recede from the crass commercialism gone insane, get off the chain Stay on your square where the price of integrity remain, get off the chain Live free from the lure of it’s-the-fashionably latest thing; escape from the credit prison, cut off the chain Die free being pure from the newest buy-product offering; flee into the austerity wasteland, cast off the chain: Escape those subliminal messages telling you to sell yourself into debt slavery again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/19/2017 9:04:00 PM
This is very cool, Freddie! Good message, well written!
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Date: 7/19/2017 6:31:00 PM
Awesome and important pen my friend xomo
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:30:00 PM
Love the rhythm of your verse and the topic. Yes, we all need to listen, and get off from going into debt. It's not health
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Date: 7/19/2017 3:08:00 PM
This is awesome and has a Rap flavor to it that I really find appealing. Keep it comin'!
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Date: 7/19/2017 1:15:00 PM
Amen, Freddie. "Vanity is the quicksand of reason" I don't even own a credit card. material things mean nothing to me. Thou shalt not covet!
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Date: 7/19/2017 1:05:00 PM
Excellent poem Freddie. Yes, you are heard loud and clear with a very important message. I have missed you my friend :)
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