Off the Chain


It’s a hot commodity,
seems as if everybody gotta have it
Possessing something
that gives such elevated status
	is a coveted thing
Desired for the inordinate attention it bring
Ownership of something
that raises the personal profile
		to such gaudy heights
	is a top priority:
Acquisition of property for consumer vanity police
Proceed to charge it and retain,
		if it’s off the chain
Round up the Usual Suspects dot.com gang,
		if it’s off the chain
It’s can’t-get-enough of it merchandise type stuff,
looks like nobody can do without it ... from pillow to puff
Linen to makeup, brush on the checkbook blush
Get in on the cable premium package gold rush
But my message of materialism chastity is clear: Listen up,
my fellow disciples of truth, and those who will hear — 
Don’t buy into the noisy commodity market fear,
		 dip not your hand into the savings slush
Turn down the volume ... raise the decibels of the hush
Not owning something
	that puts you 
		in another social stratosphere,
	will send you 
to the bottom of the popularity heap 
		        ... do I make myself clear
Is the message getting thru 
the carnival barker wax plugging your ear
Recede from the crass commercialism gone insane,
		get off the chain
Stay on your square where the price of integrity remain,
		get off the chain
Live free from the lure of it’s-the-fashionably latest thing;
			escape from the credit prison, 
		cut off the chain
Die free being pure from the newest buy-product offering;
			flee into the austerity wasteland,
		cast off the chain:
Escape those subliminal messages telling you to
sell yourself into debt slavery again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Teagan Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 9:04 PM
This is very cool, Freddie! Good message, well written!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Awesome and important pen my friend xomo
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Love the rhythm of your verse and the topic. Yes, we all need to listen, and get off from going into debt. It's not health
Cozart Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 3:08 PM
This is awesome and has a Rap flavor to it that I really find appealing. Keep it comin'!
Turner Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Amen, Freddie. "Vanity is the quicksand of reason" I don't even own a credit card. material things mean nothing to me. Thou shalt not covet!
Sands Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Excellent poem Freddie. Yes, you are heard loud and clear with a very important message. I have missed you my friend :)
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