Off i Nod

    On this day, you must rest
    to pass my Sabbath test
       thunders Almighty God

    Not to rest’s
    a bigger test, (sigh i)
      ~ as off i nod
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Greenhough Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 3:47 PM
Sounds like God wants a nap. It must be tiring watching billions of people all the time.
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:41 PM
Yeah. Poor Guy in the Sky! lol. :) gw
Flood Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 3:15 PM
Think of it as a siesta. Lately, I’ve watched the same episode of a Netflix series three times cos I keep falling asleep… I’m not sure whether that says something about me… or the series ;-)
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:30 PM
Ha, ha! I had to give up teaching when the principal walked in one day, and he looked at the screen I was teaching from. It read --ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd... You get the iDea!
Lawless Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 6:12 AM
long sermon....short attention span...
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:29 PM
They should sell long sermons instead of 'C-Pap' devices. But sermon-selling is just so 17th century, I guess ~ gw
Cunningham Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 11:29 PM
As you get older you're allowed to nod off anytime of day lol. Tom
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:27 PM
And I take full advantage, Tom. I assure you!
Parker Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 8:12 PM
Trying to keep to two naps a day...Zzzzzz! Cute and clever, Lobo. :o)
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Only two?! Well, I guess the days are getting shorter now. lol, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 5:09 PM
Flips as we get older. Hard to stay awake sometimes!
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:24 PM
Two naps a day keeps my narcolepsy away!
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