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Off Course

storm, weight of rain sloshes
o’er the sides of the acrylic tub
thunder of strobe, eyes blinking
slashes of screams, disaster —
utterance of lips, gutteral
door jammed, eye to eye contact
with the lion and lamb; the owl
on heights of despair interrogates,
scrutinizes, eyeballs the blood seas,
sees all, inspects your history,
his and his too, talons tapping.

outside the storm-beset sanctuary 
enlightenment, smoky decanter,
revolt against rage, mercy seeks
mercy great, dumbo’s ears all wet,
humbling effect, spirit genuflect

running, running, out of breath
entangled in net, unseen drooling
at achilles tendon, heel’s devotion

genuflection at soaked-white tow’r,
emptied of a mother’s call, deliver’d
a newborn once more — water
breaking, agony of childbirth

the ruination of seeds, road rage
— off course; after impregnation
of tumbling weeds, g.p.s turned off

God is greater than all this. Later
it seems frivolous. Weight was great —
shoulder-pounding, tremulous.

But He comforts us
as if we had a boo-boo —
God, great and wonderful
cleanses the germs
thoroughly, applies bandaid,
kisses the wound; also
the forehead

mother’s heart and stomach
patched; her seething brain
restored to sanity

God moved
the husband’s hand to phone
softened hearts of stone
punishment was puny

Three cords intertwined
A fourth runs through and through
Spirit of release and joy

the Lord allows not
the ruination of a mother’s soul;
pulls her close — nose to nose
with the lion, lamb and owl

she can only smile now

8/12/2020

Brian Strand’s contest

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Date: 8/12/2020 7:38:00 PM
Amazing, Biblical-force epic, couched in modern verse. Bravo, Kim!! Hope many will read this inspiring, powerful poem! Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 8:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Date: 8/12/2020 8:27:00 AM
(2) a lovely picture of a godly marriage. Other great phrases: the blood seas, talons tapping, gps turned off, pulled her close nose to nose. So wonderful how God has given you a talent to write, and the inspiration to make such a powerful statement to his glory. Amen!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 12:20:00 PM
I am overwhelmed by God. Blessings to you today for such encouragement and always!
Date: 8/12/2020 8:24:00 AM
(1) Kim, as I just mentioned in your Fresh Insights, you choose powerful words, they are evocative of deep meanings and carry an emotional punch. This poem tells of a crisis point that is resolved by God's comforting presence. I'm blessed by this, and happy to read of your spiritual journey. There is a real down-to-earth loving aspect of God that you capture with his kissing our wounds and our forehead. Love your metaphors of lion, lamb, and owl. The three cords reminds me of Ecclesiastes 4:12
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2020 12:19:00 PM
Amen! Thank you, John!

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