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Deep Love - by Alexandros

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Of Me

Deeply dipped in red, the Heart of a Rose
explaining the motive behind this act
Purpose being, to open and expose
knowing not how, the Soul will truly react

Freely flowing from the veins, Loves Passion
petals drip without ceasing, revealing
Reason for proceeding, in this fashion
as the stem begins to lose all feeling 

Submerged in the depth of each sensation
moments measured, Unconditionally 
While coming to the realization
love motivates through your veins, Completely

Purpose being, to open and then see
The Heart of a Rose, and the Soul of me





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Featured Poem- 6/14/2020
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Scorpio Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Sorry I know I've been completely going through your entire list of poetry this evening nah I'm not even a little bit sorry. I found a bean bag and I am completely Barnes & Nobling your pages ;) You're an incredibly brilliantly talented writer I am honored to be able to see so much of your work in one place! Highest praise A.S. P.S. "Submerged in the depth of each sensation moments measured, Unconditionally" this all but sums me up and one stanza love it
Nicole Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 6:22 PM
No need to apologize, A.S. (I can see you've taken that sorry back). Smiling at you. I'll say this: You're welcome to read my poetry any time, and for as long as you want. I'm picturing you on that bean bag, caressing the pages of my poetry book. :) Your kinds words and all your compliments bring a smile to my heart. Thank you, so much ! Indulge in those sensations, each unconditional and unforgettable moment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Schneiter Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Brandy, I love "I Want to Be In Your Poetry." It touches me, whiich everything you write does. I hope you're as healthy as your poetry, and that life is treating you well. You are often in my thoughts . . . sweet memories. Hugs, Paul
Nicole Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 8:41 PM
Paul, such a beautiful thing to say. Poetry truly touches the heart and soul. It's wonderful knowing that my words curl softly around you. I am doing well, my sweet friend. You linger in my thoughts at times. I agree, sweet memories. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gamblin Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:16 PM
This peom is so beautiful and touching to me. I love the way you wrote your feeling in this poem.
Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, theresa. My heart is in every word. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Manimala Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Congrats, Brandy Nicole. You are a nightingale. Yay, ye Born with the poetic tongue. You are an eternal poetic fountain. Poetry flows from the white rivers of ye heart. Yay, you may write poetry on thousand more blue moon nights. Dr. Jose Manimala PhD, Pala, India.
Nicole Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Hi Dr. Jose Manimala, it is so nice meeting you. Your kind words and compliments about me and my poetry are greatly appreciated. Such a wonderful comment, it is so sweet and poetic. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Robertson Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Beautifully done.
Nicole Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 8:33 PM
Thank you Milton. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Bangalee Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Purpose being, to open and then see The Heart of a Rose, and the Soul of me.. it's great; beautiful poem shared; well rated poem penned
Nicole Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Thank you MAHTAB. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Horsman Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Hi Brandy, just rambling through my favourites list here on soup...The rose may fade, this poem will never....
Nicole Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Hi Harry, your thoughts wrap softly around me. Thank you. This poem has become a favorite of mine. My heart is in every word. ~ Brandy
Wolves Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:51 PM
Yes you are indeed a beautiful heart, mind and soul. Bareing you souls deepest desires with a sacred trust of being perceived as the rare treasure you truly are...
Nicole Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 11:41 PM
Me, a rare treasure? Such an amazing thing to say. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I am humbled. This poem has become a favorite of mine. Because of the meaning behind the words. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy
Watt Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 12:09 PM
I read this several times, just soaking in the imagery of the soul as a rose slowly exposing its inner self, unsure of how it will be perceived, but generous in its willingness to reveal itself - as the heart does when it discerns it can truly trust another. Your romanticism and vulnerability are endearing, Brandy. Love the pic and music, too! Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:19 PM
John, I am truly humbled by your thoughts. You are watching a Rose slowly unfold her Petals. She is cautious allowing anyone close, yet- she does. Trusting completely. This is a favorite of mine. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. Hugs, Brandy
Warrior Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:20 AM
Came for a peek...and WoW! what a sonnet... you're on it, Brandy...your scribbles are becoming more organized lol...a fav too...sending love...^WW^
Nicole Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Thank you My Warrior with Wings, for the wonderful comment and compliment, about me and my words. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. :) Hugs and Love, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 3:48 PM
I so truly love and enjoyed reading this top class sonnet my friend! Definitely a fav for me..
Nicole Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Dear Robert, your thoughts humble me. So kind of you to say this about my words. I appreciate your placing this in your favorites. My heart is here, upon the page. ~ Brandy
Byrne Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 11:40 PM
Some really viscus lines here, I like.
Nicole Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Thank you David. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Sergi Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 8:39 PM
I could sense you bearing your soul on this beautiful poem and your wordage creates a fantastic imagery. Bravo, Brandy!
Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Dear Ralph, your thoughts hold truth- as this is the depth of my soul upon the page. Thank you for such a wonderful comment. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 4:49 PM
So glad to see this beautiful poem climbing the best poem chart..Not surprised by its success though for I chose it ...as my FAV.. first time I read it..well done, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Your thoughts truly humble me. Thank you Vijay. This holds meaning and depth, and I am in awe that words from my heart caress the best poems chart. ~ Brandy
Messina Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:27 PM
Brandy, we see the soul of you in every write you scribble...and it's a beautiful soul indeed. Wonderful write as always. Hugs Charlie
Nicole Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 9:10 PM
My heart is in every word. Soft sigh. Thank you Charlie. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy
Michael Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 1:16 PM
I didn't see this one...It's lovely...the way you rosed into the poem...
Nicole Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Thank you Arturo. Such a lovely thing to say. "A Rose in Bloom" Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 1:37 AM
I kept reading your beauty many a time! and to greet my day with "the Heart of a Rose" the utmost of joy! Dear Brandy, you are the Rose... passion, beauty and sweetness.. that's the soul of you! Lucky are the beholders! Lucky are your ardent readers! A soul that is able of deeper knowing of the inner self, is a growing Beauty that adds a lot to Life.. an immense pleasure to read you, dear Brandy.. a FAV.. I have missed a lot!.. love and blessings.
Nicole Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Dear Besma, your thoughts always wrap gently around me. You are so kind and caring. You have such a Wonderful Heart. Thank you for this lovely comment, for placing this in your favorites. Your light shines ever so brightly. What a blessing it is, being in your presence. Thank you for being here, for being You. Peace to you and love. ~ Brandy
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:38 AM
This is beautifully written and I love the ending! :)
Nicole Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Thank you Heidi. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy
May Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Beautifully penned Brandy..
Nicole Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Astounding write Brandy
Nicole Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Thank you Allen. ~ Brandy
Horsman Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 4:32 PM
Your art of scribble sure does beat a wonderful sincere poem, Love this Brandy, to my fav.
Nicole Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Thank you Harry. My heart is in every word. I appreciate your kind thoughts, and for favoring this scribble of mine. ~ Brandy
Sharp Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:26 AM
There really is a lot of Southern Belle in this piece, Brandy. Very nice write.
Nicole Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Lawrence. Indeed there is, as I am a Southern Belle. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Warrior Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Ah, the heart of a rose brings explosions of love...your soul is one of them...lovely sonnet my friend...I can smell the roses now...I'm in trance, got to write a poem lol...^WW^...{*J*}
Nicole Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Thank you my Warrior with Wings!! Such a Sweet thing to Say. I am just me. Yes, the fragrance of love does linger. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Your words waltz gracefully across the page, Brandy. The Heart of the Rose is beautiful indeed and her Soul shines. All my best. John
Nicole Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Thank you John. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Beautiful words adorn this sonnet.. it flows with feelings and passion..excellent write, Brandy. A FAV.
Nicole Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Many moments and emotions are within. Your support is appreciated and your thoughts. Thank you Vijay. Favoring this, means so much to me. ~ Brandy
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