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Of Lust

Eyes wide shut I sit Watching her un-clothe her thoughts 'Til her mind is bare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2011 7:44:00 PM
Hmmmm This is well thought out and nicely done. To sit and truly listen to someone as they speak is to understand what they are saying. It's possible to hear what someone says without listening. That's when you get things wrong. To truly pay attention and listen is the key to KNOWING what was said. Well Done indeed. God Bless, JB
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