Of Lust

Eyes wide shut I sit
Watching her un-clothe her thoughts
'Til her mind is bare
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 22, 2011 at 7:44 PM
Hmmmm This is well thought out and nicely done. To sit and truly listen to someone as they speak is to understand what they are saying. It's possible to hear what someone says without listening. That's when you get things wrong. To truly pay attention and listen is the key to KNOWING what was said. Well Done indeed. God Bless, JB
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