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Of Love and Life and Pain

Life, you're a little more long tonight
a blast through a soft fleeting light
too fast, too soon, gone out sight

Love, you're a little forlorn tonight
a chill, but still, grasping for light 
once tight, but now shaken with fright

Forefather's warm these strains
unburden me of my visceral pain
dare to make life, alive again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/12/2017 7:24:00 AM
Yeah some of us can relate. Great poem Tim! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/11/2017 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Tim.
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Date: 12/10/2017 7:59:00 PM
a very interesting one, Tim. I love the patterning of life, love and then that hateful pain!!
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Date: 12/10/2017 1:48:00 PM
A fav.. boom!
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Date: 12/9/2017 1:22:00 PM
A lot like my poem called "No Love, No Life and Great Pain" :)
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Date: 12/9/2017 9:18:00 AM
wow this is really good, Tim. Goes well with my mood today.
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:25:00 AM
- Great written, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2017 9:23:00 PM
This is very touching Mr. Tim
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Date: 12/7/2017 3:12:00 PM
I can feel this one Tim .....love life and pain .....you wouldn't think they would come disguised as one but in reality the do more often then not great write you summed it up well!
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Date: 12/7/2017 2:11:00 PM
Great one Tim. I love the ending too :)
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Date: 12/7/2017 1:06:00 PM
Good write, Tim. I like this very much.
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Date: 12/7/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Dale