Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Of Life Or Limb

Smack dab in the heights 
a moment missed 
where cracks crease 
the self-destruct
unnoticed 
in the reality
that life evolves
enveloping every step
up the ladder
surveying tattered seams
costs of lovers dreams
and then you fall
or fail
to see the lessons
and what they truly mean

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Eve Roper October 18, 2017 at 12:36 PM deep and amazing write, Tim.

Sara Ella October 18, 2017 at 9:03 AM Love the music Tim - beautiful. :) You have a very meaningful poem - life is always evolving-learning, growing. This is a fav!

Arthur Vaso October 17, 2017 at 9:46 PM Very contemplative poem, I like. Great music you choose well.

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2017 at 6:06 PM Deep poem and well written, Tim. I especially like the last lines and how you tied it up. Tim Smith October 17, 2017 at 7:36 PM Thanks Andrea