Of Ladies and Lords

He walked with her a good mile
and talked with increasing smile,
with wonder he sat,
for the gladness in her heart;
...spent her days with wild hope ---
that he was in her eldest dreams,
from the beginning smote her monsters
and eased her deepest fears...

Now he rode with her again on his great white steed,
'til the edge of some mystic dusk;
and turn they could though too darkling
the winnowed wood, and chasing with shadows
the misted nite path, and she finally bade him
and his hidden forest hideaway;
so quaint and annointed with its little beds,
and bruin skins 'ere the hearth
and lordly portraits above its mantel;
and he lit it alive with warmth,
and the moon had come swift through the garland window

And in her hand he thrust the dearest of wine,
with nectar lush for a goddess, 
and dearer her heart for him more they dined;
yet he pressed no closer ---
and gazed delicately glancing her bosom,
remained mostly her lunar eyes...
and bade her a fine warm shawl ---

But the wine and fire...his eyes...
his eyes upon her though brief ---
stroked her where they fell,
and smiling she was longing his lips,
but caught her lust...
her heart! she could hear it drumming desperate

" I am almost too warm for your fine shawl..."
" Too warm? " said the lord ---
" no wine could simmer so, and the fireplace
too slight for such heat... your eyes undress me... "

And no nite they had ended...
nor any morning come betwixt them,
(but a kingdom of love in some forest green)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/20/2017 9:17:00 PM
I love both the romance and the story telling here, great write!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 8/22/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thanks for the honors, Arthur, it was a different write , always appreciate your visits brother:-)
Date: 8/18/2017 1:06:00 PM
This is a greeeaat romantic poem, Keith! The flow ... the flits and flutters, the demure suggestions. This has the whole ball of wax this poem does. A superbly elegant write beautifully expressed. An instant fave for sure. May love light your path always.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 8/19/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks brother, I am well pleased you enjoyed:-) God bless
Date: 8/17/2017 1:22:00 PM
- A beautiful and romantic poem, Keith - A definition of "tender love" - The boundless strength of love - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 8/17/2017 1:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise! Many hugs back:-)
Date: 8/15/2017 6:49:00 AM
WITHOUT ANY DOUBT THIS IS A TRUE ROMANTIC GEM ! A superb creation my massively talented friend.. My wife just read it and looked at me saying, - "Darling, you have got a lot of catching up to do.." BRILLIANT POETRY!!! a fav...
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 8/16/2017 8:25:00 AM
Many thanks to you and your wife Robert;-)
Date: 8/13/2017 11:27:00 AM
Amazing piece of poetry Keith...a fav
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 8/16/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Tim, and sorry for not commenting on your poetry and others; been too busy unfortunately:-)
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