Of Hope Had Broken Pillar
Of Hope Had Broken Pillar
Instead of being a big thriller,
Found film to only be a filler;
We took pause,
Was lost cause;
Of hope had broken the pillar.
Jim Jubilation T. Corn Cob Horn
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