Timothy Mcguire Poet Free verse

Of Hangovers

a hangover is natures way 
of reminding us that our bodies
do not always agree with
what our minds have decided to do

One Sentence Metaphor in Free Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jesse Rowe
7/29/19

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Susan Ashley August 4, 2019 at 9:11 PM Indeed, Timothy, so wonderfully said. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Timothy Mcguire August 4, 2019 at 9:14 PM Thank you so much Susan

P.S. Awtry August 4, 2019 at 11:22 AM love what you did with the prompt! so clever :) Congratulations! Timothy Mcguire August 4, 2019 at 12:29 PM Thanks PS

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2019 at 9:00 AM This is so down to earth. Very very cool congrats for the win. Timothy Mcguire August 2, 2019 at 3:53 PM Thanks Andrea

Randy Steele August 2, 2019 at 8:23 AM Congrats on your win, Timothy. Good job. Timothy Mcguire August 2, 2019 at 3:53 PM Thanks Randy

John Gondolf August 2, 2019 at 6:55 AM Congrats on your win, Timothy, your humorous words hold so much truth. John Timothy Mcguire August 2, 2019 at 3:53 PM Thanks John!

Line Gauthier August 2, 2019 at 5:04 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Timothy.

Jesse Rowe August 1, 2019 at 11:43 PM Timothy, congrats on your placement in my contest. This reminded me of the saying, "Your mouth (mind) is writing checks your body can't cash." Timothy Mcguire August 2, 2019 at 12:37 AM You are right Jesse! Thanks

Line Gauthier July 31, 2019 at 4:07 AM LOL this sure sounds like a winner. Timothy Mcguire July 31, 2019 at 8:02 PM Thank you LMG

Jeanne Mcgee July 29, 2019 at 10:59 PM lol sounds like you know about this! Timothy Mcguire July 29, 2019 at 11:13 PM Unfortunately and memories fade after time! Thanks Jeanne!