Of God and Mankind

As a child, 
I always imagined God 
being so far away in the sky, caressing his long, white beard. 
I imagined Him 
sometimes looking at the stars, 
forgetting to focus on His most important creation: Earth. 
I wondered if His absent-mindedness caused all the troubles we have 
in the world today. 
I imagined demons watching the diversion of His eyes very keenly…. 
My grandmother then told me: 
“Clouds have very keen ears. 
They listen to your mouth and heart.” 
“Trees have keen sense of touch. 
They can feel your emotions, as they brush past them”. 
“The Sun has keen eyes. 
It sees what you are thinking”. 
She told me everything was part of God, 
waiting for me to accept myself as part of God…. 
Everything was chaos and order intertwined in a web 
we call time… 

In a distant future,
A child imagined God
being high up in the universe, weaving magical links here on Earth
She imagined Him
sometimes looking down on men's creations: Virtual Life, Automated Machines.
frowning and at the same time amused
She wondered if His frowning meant disapproval of men's stupidity
or if he is amused at men's conflicts of morals
She imagined devils lurking in the humanoids planning a rebellion
Her ancestors' words ringing in her mind:
"Cameras are everywhere now.
They watch your every move."
"Walls have interactive sensors.
They can feel your pulse and heartbeat."
"The AI has invulnerable algorithm.
It sees what you are contemplating".
They told her everything was created by men,
catapulting the human race into a machine-dependent complacent beings
Everything human was diluted and morale intertwined in a virtual web
we call internet…



A Collaborated Poem with Angeline Haikutwinkle
Copyright © 2016 July 20th (Japan Time Zone)
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Capitano Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Great stuff!! Woven seamlessly between viewpoints. Definitely a7.
Kimathi Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Thank you so much Phil, for enjoying our piece!! :-)
Nyaga Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 3:41 AM
an Excellent Collabo guys well written.. and congrats on your placement
Kimathi Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying our piece, bro!! ;-)
Haikutwinkle Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Just stopping by to say thank you to all the people who commented on our collaboration. It was indeed an interesting blend of two minds.
Kimathi Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Hi Angeline. It's really great working with you.... Let's keep our musings' fire burning *_^
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Wow n this is the spiritual n technology n human state of affairs all intertwined in an awesome poetic web. Machines depend on man n man on machines and they both are the result of God's super mind. Kudos.
Kimathi Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:10 AM
You've summarised our poem in a way we can't add or subtract from it; really awesome!! Thanks Zaynub, for reading and enjoying our piece!! ;-)
Bateman Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Hello Teddy, A most powerful collaboration here for sure. The infinite reach and manifestation of God (Himself and Herself) in the human experience are inextricably bound to our finite existence in a quite interesting fashion. You and Angeline did a masterful job with this write. SEVEN/FAV!!Cheers and Best, Gary
Kimathi Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:05 AM
Indeed we are interwoven with God, Gary. Thank you so much for your insightful comment, and enjoying our piece!! ;-)
Kannan Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Great poem... Nice colloboration...
Kimathi Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Thank you so much Supraja, for passing by to read, and enjoy our work!! ;-)
Haikutwinkle Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 6:54 PM
It looks great too on the left side...lol. Thanks for posting and collaborating ;) Interesting to see where one idea leads to another....
Kimathi Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Lolest, you can call me left-handed.... True, it's as though we are in an adventure of our own by merging our worlds together!! Glad working with you, Angeline!! *^_^*
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