Of God and Mankind

As a child, 
I always imagined God 
being so far away in the sky, caressing his long, white beard. 
I imagined Him 
sometimes looking at the stars, 
forgetting to focus on His most important creation: Earth. 
I wondered if His absent-mindedness caused all the troubles we have 
in the world today. 
I imagined demons watching the diversion of His eyes very keenly…. 
My grandmother then told me: 
“Clouds have very keen ears. 
They listen to your mouth and heart.” 
“Trees have keen sense of touch. 
They can feel your emotions, as they brush past them”. 
“The Sun has keen eyes. 
It sees what you are thinking”. 
She told me everything was part of God, 
waiting for me to accept myself as part of God…. 
Everything was chaos and order intertwined in a web 
we call time… 

In a distant future,
A child imagined God
being high up in the universe, weaving magical links here on Earth
She imagined Him
sometimes looking down on men's creations: Virtual Life, Automated Machines.
frowning and at the same time amused
She wondered if His frowning meant disapproval of men's stupidity
or if he is amused at men's conflicts of morals
She imagined devils lurking in the humanoids planning a rebellion
Her ancestors' words ringing in her mind:
"Cameras are everywhere now.
They watch your every move."
"Walls have interactive sensors.
They can feel your pulse and heartbeat."
"The AI has invulnerable algorithm.
It sees what you are contemplating".
They told her everything was created by men,
catapulting the human race into a machine-dependent complacent beings
Everything human was diluted and morale intertwined in a virtual web
we call internet…



A Collaborated Poem with Angeline Haikutwinkle
Copyright © 2016 July 20th (Japan Time Zone)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/4/2016 10:17:00 AM
Great stuff!! Woven seamlessly between viewpoints. Definitely a7.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/5/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Phil, for enjoying our piece!! :-)
Date: 8/4/2016 3:41:00 AM
an Excellent Collabo guys well written.. and congrats on your placement
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/4/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying our piece, bro!! ;-)
Date: 7/30/2016 8:31:00 AM
Just stopping by to say thank you to all the people who commented on our collaboration. It was indeed an interesting blend of two minds.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2016 2:17:00 AM
Hi Angeline. It's really great working with you.... Let's keep our musings' fire burning *_^
Date: 7/30/2016 12:41:00 AM
Wow n this is the spiritual n technology n human state of affairs all intertwined in an awesome poetic web. Machines depend on man n man on machines and they both are the result of God's super mind. Kudos.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2016 4:10:00 AM
You've summarised our poem in a way we can't add or subtract from it; really awesome!! Thanks Zaynub, for reading and enjoying our piece!! ;-)
Date: 7/29/2016 5:14:00 PM
Hello Teddy, A most powerful collaboration here for sure. The infinite reach and manifestation of God (Himself and Herself) in the human experience are inextricably bound to our finite existence in a quite interesting fashion. You and Angeline did a masterful job with this write. SEVEN/FAV!!Cheers and Best, Gary
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2016 4:05:00 AM
Indeed we are interwoven with God, Gary. Thank you so much for your insightful comment, and enjoying our piece!! ;-)
Date: 7/25/2016 8:00:00 AM
Great poem... Nice colloboration...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2016 3:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Supraja, for passing by to read, and enjoy our work!! ;-)
Date: 7/20/2016 6:54:00 PM
It looks great too on the left side...lol. Thanks for posting and collaborating ;) Interesting to see where one idea leads to another....
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/20/2016 7:33:00 PM
Lolest, you can call me left-handed.... True, it's as though we are in an adventure of our own by merging our worlds together!! Glad working with you, Angeline!! *^_^*
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