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"Fallen leaves lying on the grass in the November sun bring more happiness than daffodils"
Looking back through the years, and the springtime of youth Rewinding old songs, ...filled with moonlight and rain The lyrics, were branches, a mere fantasy's, spoof How deep grew the roots, where my own truth remained? In the autumn of life, when my thoughts might unwind There's a thin thread of light, through the leaves of the years The sun shines much clearer, as if by design with rays of contentment, without any fear We become who we are, by just reaching the bar By climbing the branches, and surviving each fall We may have been reaching for the moon and the stars But to learn how to fall, is the point of it all So wide were our eyes when we looked to those stars, But each falling leaf, we can keep, ....to be ours
___________________________________________ For Sara's Contest: A Penny For Your Thoughts 3/18/15

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Date: 3/26/2015 2:52:00 PM
Carrie, Thanks for participating in my contest...I enjoyed reading your entry..Unique quote that you selected..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:56:00 PM
A 7 ! ! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 3/24/2015 7:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win.. Beautifully expressed sentiments on the years of our lives. Our future hopes are the foundation for our journeying forward without great trepidation and fear. Yes, we fall but we rise up to carry on. A7 and wonderful write.
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:48:00 PM
Exquisite, deep, and such inspirational words...from the springtime to the autumn of our lives...I love your poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:07:00 AM
That's awesome Carrie! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:51:00 AM
Very nice work! The fall brings a clarity to life that's hidden by the flowers of our spring. RAY
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