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Of Ether and Earth

Of ether and earth we are made, not fully one or the other, and so we always feel untethered, ever restless, prone at times to coming apart... whole nations come apart, what chance then have you or I? Our souls seek the air, our bodies cling to earth, We are never one or the other, we are never at rest. Some wait for death, some wait for God...

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Date: 5/9/2021 8:20:00 PM
Dear L. J., your gifted poetic pen spills profound ink. I am swept up into the depth and breadth of your poem.. indeed, we are conceived of duality and physically exist in a state of duality.. Your final two lines define the essence of faith and are a grand finale to a deep and thought-provoking piece that leaves lots of room for ideas and feelings to roam. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/11/2021 8:01:00 AM
Again Susan, coming from you, it is even sweeter! This is the title poem of a 2nd collection a trade publisher brought out last month-- again, much to my astonishment!
Date: 4/12/2021 8:22:00 PM
I love the depth that is present in your poem L.J. Made me think and made me wonder. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/14/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, George--you paid me the highest compliment a poet--or any writer--can get...
Date: 4/11/2021 9:18:00 PM
So true, LJ! And while we wait, the magic happens! Congrats on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/12/2021 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, U.S. [sorry, couldn't resist]
Date: 4/11/2021 12:09:00 PM
A thought provoking write, L.J.! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/11/2021 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Kim--and may you go with God always!

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