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Of Ether and Earth

Of ether and earth we are made,
not fully one or the other, and
so  we always feel  untethered,
ever restless, prone at times
to coming apart...
whole nations come apart,
what chance then have you 
or I?

Our souls seek the air,
our bodies cling to earth,
We are never one or the
other, we are never at rest.

Some wait for death,
some wait for God...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ashley Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 8:20 PM
Dear L. J., your gifted poetic pen spills profound ink. I am swept up into the depth and breadth of your poem.. indeed, we are conceived of duality and physically exist in a state of duality.. Your final two lines define the essence of faith and are a grand finale to a deep and thought-provoking piece that leaves lots of room for ideas and feelings to roam. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Carber Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Again Susan, coming from you, it is even sweeter! This is the title poem of a 2nd collection a trade publisher brought out last month-- again, much to my astonishment!
Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 8:22 PM
I love the depth that is present in your poem L.J. Made me think and made me wonder. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you, George--you paid me the highest compliment a poet--or any writer--can get...
Seeker Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:18 PM
So true, LJ! And while we wait, the magic happens! Congrats on your win!
Carber Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Thanks, U.S. [sorry, couldn't resist]
Merryman Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 12:09 PM
A thought provoking write, L.J.! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Carber Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Kim--and may you go with God always!
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