Of Dampness and Breath

Of Dampness & Breath Alone with his idiosyncrasies shuffling along the pointillist perfection of tedious shore, an old man luminous by moonlight’s slight lemon glow swirls in the magic of dampness & breath; their convergence emerged a silver-toned fog at the mouth of a planked wooden pier; aware underfoot the diminishing whole being breached and exposed for its soft, supple core as structureless saltwater lulls and and lulls lulls and and lulls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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June 3, 2019 at 5:17 AM
You grabbed me with this: "Alone with his idiosyncrasies"And you never let me go!
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