Notes About The Poem

Of Chaos

Chaos is but

   a furious gust

  of wind blowing

through the desert

   glorying order

  overwhelmingly

      with sand 

      and dust.



One Sentence Metaphor in Free Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jesse Rowe
Date written and submitted: 07/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Very dynamic rhythm, Edward. The reader feels the gush of energy behind that chaos.
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, Line:-)
Michael Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Perfect...from chaotic winds to sand order...
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Thank you, Arturo:-)
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