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    Chaos is but

   a furious gust

  of wind blowing

through the desert

   glorying order

  overwhelmingly

      with sand 

      and dust.



One Sentence Metaphor in Free Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jesse Rowe
Date written and submitted: 07/28/2019

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Date: 7/28/2019 4:21:00 PM
Very dynamic rhythm, Edward. The reader feels the gush of energy behind that chaos.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2019 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Line:-)
Date: 7/28/2019 12:41:00 PM
Perfect...from chaotic winds to sand order...
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2019 3:09:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo:-)