William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Of Being Forever

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Of Being Forever


Of being forever dealt joys,
Hope occasions kept prayers,
Righteous life earnestly employs,
Constant good saved our tears,

-- to live, then know death takes,
-- to die, then know life waits,
the wherewithal creates,

Answers our endeavor,
Of being forever.


2021 October 19
*9th Place*
Quietus - October 2021
~~Unseeking Seeker: Judged 2021 October 27
*Preferred PS o'er HMS per line differential.

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Sam Kauffman October 29, 2021 at 11:00 AM William, congratulations for your win. You have truly expressed the very crux of life - to die is to live. There are so many times in life when we have to die to ourselves only to find a new life in life. Wonderfully spoken! Aloha blessings my friend. William Kelii Kekaula October 29, 2021 at 11:05 AM Being born again experienced by many, within and beyond the church, Sam, a wondrous thank you, my friend, Aloha!

Janice Canerdy October 28, 2021 at 6:35 AM Yes, forever! CONGRATS on your win, William! Janice William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2021 at 8:04 AM Thank you, Janice, most thoughtful of you, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2021 at 4:47 AM Love this: to live, then know death takes/ to die, then know life waits//Congratulations, William! William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2021 at 8:03 AM Thank you, Kim, for your highlighted share, glad you like it, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex October 28, 2021 at 12:06 AM It's a great poem. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2021 at 12:34 AM Thank you, Christuraj, Aloha!

Unseeking Seeker October 27, 2021 at 9:14 PM Thank you for participating and congrats on your win, William! William Kelii Kekaula October 27, 2021 at 9:23 PM Thanks, US, 'twas fun, Aloha!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 22, 2021 at 10:10 AM Wow well said in great rhyme scheme and i liked the thought of being forever as i believe in eternal life. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>•¥^^^^~ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. William Kelii Kekaula October 22, 2021 at 11:03 AM My kindest regards for your insightful expressions. Blessings, Aloha!