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*Image of Creation Adam by Everypixel. Of Being Forever Of being forever dealt joys, Hope occasions kept prayers, Righteous life earnestly employs, Constant good saved our tears, -- to live, then know death takes, -- to die, then know life waits, the wherewithal creates, Answers our endeavor, Of being forever. 2021 October 19 *9th Place* Quietus - October 2021 ~~Unseeking Seeker: Judged 2021 October 27 *Preferred PS o'er HMS per line differential.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2021 11:00:00 AM

William, congratulations for your win. You have truly expressed the very crux of life - to die is to live. There are so many times in life when we have to die to ourselves only to find a new life in life. Wonderfully spoken! Aloha blessings my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/29/2021 11:05:00 AM

Being born again experienced by many, within and beyond the church, Sam, a wondrous thank you, my friend, Aloha!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/28/2021 6:35:00 AM

Yes, forever! CONGRATS on your win, William! Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2021 8:04:00 AM

Thank you, Janice, most thoughtful of you, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2021 4:47:00 AM

Love this: to live, then know death takes/ to die, then know life waits//Congratulations, William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2021 8:03:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, for your highlighted share, glad you like it, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/28/2021 12:06:00 AM

It's a great poem. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/28/2021 12:34:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj, Aloha!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/27/2021 9:14:00 PM

Thank you for participating and congrats on your win, William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/27/2021 9:23:00 PM

Thanks, US, 'twas fun, Aloha!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/22/2021 10:10:00 AM

Wow well said in great rhyme scheme and i liked the thought of being forever as i believe in eternal life. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>•¥^^^^~ Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/22/2021 11:03:00 AM

My kindest regards for your insightful expressions. Blessings, Aloha!