Notes About The Poem

Of Anticipation

Anticipation is like
the gnawing of a
hungry squirrel that
cracks open a nut
with the outcome of 
a delighted squirrel
or a rotten nut.


July 28, 2019

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Godwin Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Unreal, I wrote mine about anticipation and just at the last moment changed it to freedom! We do share a wavelength of some sort, I just know it. Your words definitely served! Be golden ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Very unreal, CayCay! I am very pleased to share any wavelength with you! Thank you so much for your support and lovely comments- they are much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 10:55 PM
Good one, Sandra. I like how you have both possible outcomes in one breath.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Thanks for your positive comment, Line, even though it didn't make the list! Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Beautifully said Sandra
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Thank you very much, James! Sandra
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