Bl Devnath Poet Monoku

Of All Things and Thoughts

value of taste's lost 
                                     when naturality's lost
                                   of all things and thoughts

                                        bound as natural
                                   though made as artificial  
                                  thanks God nature's there

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Timothy Hicks March 9, 2016 at 10:55 PM Contemplation and nature ... two things that the modern world is lacking a bit. Your senryu collage gives much to think about ... thank God nature will be an escape, when the "concrete jungle" becomes too overbearing! Nicely written, my friend. Bl Devnath March 10, 2016 at 8:05 AM When naturality is lost value of taste gets lost so we made artificial things with the taste of naturality, the sense we get from the nature created by God. Thanks my lovely friend, bl

Paul Callus March 6, 2016 at 7:35 AM These are two meaningful senryu, BL. Artificiality can never be any better than God's natural blessings. ~ All the best. // paul Bl Devnath March 6, 2016 at 10:57 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2016 at 4:21 AM - Words of wisdom and truth - Great written my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath March 6, 2016 at 10:53 AM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your uplifting comment. Loved always, bl