Of a Bad Ping-Pong Player

Playing Ping-Pong now,
The ball hits the glass- which the 
                    murky pool shines through.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 12, 2015 at 12:13 PM
RICAHRD:) thank you for the uplifting haiku. Love SKAT
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May 11, 2009 at 11:46 PM
This is more of a senryu, a senryu is not about nature where haiku is about nature, great work though...Raul
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