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Written: July 1st, 2023   ______________________________________________________________ This daring is the essence of a fighter. Most clashes to come in this epic writer With all my might, I swing my sword. If right and wrong collide sans chord, But true conflicts run deep. Beyond the realms of dark and white, A complexity that I must reap, In shades of gray, my battles ignite. In this enormous and endless universe. My life's start and close are diverse. These ties are firm and can't be torn. One life is such a note in my glorious scorn. Harmonious and grand, Surrounded by those who understand, Integral parts of my eternal being, Together, in this symphony, we are seeing Time, a mere illusion, is subject to my sway. Every choice I bear shapes their fate. A power beyond the passing days, Destinies intertwined, forever tied to one gate. Confronting fears, I find my true might. Unveiling the greatness hidden in sight Transcending the limits of passing time, Unleash the warrior's true essence, undimmed. In the depths of my soul, courage takes flight. As I face the shadows and the darkest night, Each fear conquered is a step toward the light. Embracing my power with all my might No longer defined by the ticking clock, I rise above, no longer locked, In the chains of aging and decay, I am timeless, forever in sway. With every battle, I grow strong, My spirit soars, my heart beats on, In the essence of a warrior bold, A story of battles yet untold.

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Date: 7/2/2023 7:48:00 AM
The Battle of Troy is a famous epic I have never tired reading. Your poem is stunning. Sotto, you outdid yourself.
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Date: 7/2/2023 5:39:00 AM
A brave heart, relentless and unyielding. A true warrior shunning fear to reveal the essence of his power and might. Its almost inconceivable to me how you can put such meaning and feeling into your poems with mere words. Its magic ! This one took my breath away. A favorite for sure. It should be POTD
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Date: 7/2/2023 4:38:00 AM
May you win your battles and find all that God has for you. God bless you friend, much love, Gina
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