Odyssey a Structured Prose -Verse-Recited

Little children  become loving
people in the odyssey of life.
Innocence exchanged for 
ecstasy in love,marriage,
relationships ups&downs 
..and strife.Pebbles in the
shoes,an eyelash in the eye
minor irritations ,parables &
trials to make us sigh if we've
confessed & met our maker
before we die.

Listen to me recite this structuredprose on youtube under my pen name ichthys chiro
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 30, 2014 at 10:24 PM
I have become a fan of Prose poetry and though the writing world at the moment isn't very friendly to it, I like it anyway :) loved the pebble in the shoe & eyelash metaphor. Light & Love
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