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"Odysseus and The Siren"
There he is like Odysseus bound to the mast of his ship cursive words dispatched through aether to the somnolent nodding in their stock he avoids full brace the Siren’s enchantment a song that sings his internal compass towards her she commands and swiftly ignites the St Elmo's Fire burning in his mind she is a mused and flattered bee she is the electric storm come to defibrillate his heart washed up like a shipwreck spent with all his split treasure boxes on her Sirenum Scopuli jagged oyster rocks wet and lush wise pearls that glisten no ocean dwelling sprite this lark with tale to swim in the murky pea-green soup with pterodactyls and sabre-toothed sharks ;) white-washed with lye who in her loonish wake he does divine delight She, possessing wings that fly no silver scales that sting - her She songs lure crazed men out of their dark to shine in Lux the Light emollient their flinty core and like a graceful lark midnight-winged in full-feathered fast flight she soars her songs trilling enraptured minds imparts cold hearts to ride with Goddesses on Gryphons she conjures spells and lyrics on a soft silent breeze where mutes with a thousand eyes do listen - 'tis not her songs that men should fear 'tis in her black Silence rips and tears The Veil for when her magic songs do cease your sad loss is the moment you are truly captured with no release Tenacious she will beckon you until without resistance you yielding to her heart dive into her mind of Deep Deep then to blinding bright Azure Some say beware the Sirens they are death to men who love impart and risk all dusky musky sin Ah lark that sings Put away your periscope this Siren bird resounds the heat that comes with passion words of waking liberation that do not drug but unravel all your tight chaste ropes to dream of better things lust and longing - have faith, one can but hope to find the place outside of all that fear that steered the Greek and Roman Poets - to risk the circumnavigate invisible portal The 1 True Gate the beating heart 'neath shelter of her feathery wings to find her talons holding tight to all her muses, mere mortals, turn to magical beings safe in Anthemoessa to dream with the Gods of LOVE and FREEDOM (LadyLabyrinth/2018)

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Date: 1/13/2020 5:38:00 AM
A great find for me this new morn. I love Greek mythology. This poetic creation sings of art, mythology, sirens, magical creatures, Homer, Troy, Achilles, and the mind of ancient man trying to explain the mystery of earth, sky, life and universe! A fav- a true jewel too...
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Date: 11/11/2019 10:48:00 PM
she can't be much of a siren if she's luring crazed men! fun touch with the winky smile after the prehistoric creatures ref. I just wonder if the Odysseus tale is considered prehistoric too and that perhaps he even had a tail! ... I thoroughly enjoyed the analogies and references and great music too :)
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Date: 12/23/2018 8:01:00 PM
"Now the Sirens have a still more fatal weapon than their song, namely their silence. And though admittedly such a thing never happened, it is still conceivable that someone might possibly have escaped from their singing; but from their silence certainly never."
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Date: 12/23/2018 8:00:00 PM
"Odysseus, bravest of heroes, Draw near to us, on our Green island, Odysseus, we’ll teach you wisdom, We’ll give you love, sweeter than honey. The songs we sing, soothe away sorrow, And in our arms, you will be happy. Odysseus, bravest of heroes, The songs we sing, will bring you peace."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/23/2018 8:00:00 PM
The Odyssey is about the hero Odysseus who is doomed by the gods to wander for years from his home.
Date: 12/23/2018 7:59:00 PM
1. "Sirens", Fleurie.
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Date: 12/23/2018 7:59:00 PM
2. "Gravitate to Me", The The.
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Date: 12/23/2018 6:24:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/St._Elmo%27s_fire
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Date: 12/23/2018 5:52:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Odysseus
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Date: 12/23/2018 5:51:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Siren_(mythology)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/24/2018 4:54:00 PM
"Sirens were believed to combine women and birds in various ways. In early Greek art, Sirens were represented as birds with large women's heads, bird feathers and scaly feet. Later, they were represented as female figures with the legs of birds, with or without wings, playing a variety of musical instruments, especially harps. The tenth-century Byzantine encyclopedia Suda says that from their chests up, Sirens had the form of sparrows, and below they were women or, alternatively, that they were little birds with women's faces.Birds were chosen because of their beautiful voices. Later Sirens were sometimes depicted as beautiful women, whose bodies, not only their voices, are seductive."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/24/2018 2:19:00 PM
The griffin, griffon, or gryphon (Greek: grýphon, grýpon, Latin: gryphus) is a legendary creature with the body, tail, and back legs of a lion; the head and wings of an eagle; and sometimes an eagle's talons as its front feet. Because the lion was traditionally considered the king of the beasts and the eagle the king of birds by the Middle Ages the griffin was thought to be an especially powerful and majestic creature. Since classical antiquity, Griffins were known for guarding treasure and priceless possessions.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/24/2018 2:18:00 PM
Stock. x 3 definitions. Lye, dangerous stuff in the wrong hands.

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