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Ode To the Unemployed

The dollar store around the block, I didn’t have a buck McDonalds had a happy meal , I was out of luck The ATM was putting out, my PIN was incorrect My bank account was overdrawn, I couldn’t write a check My car was running empty and my credit card declined VISA called and left a message wanting to remind The unemployment office said I’m ineligible to receive The resumes that I sent last week no one will ever read The doctor’s office said to me I am uninsured The treatment that’s required, you cannot afford My FICO score is falling, I cannot get a loan I cannot pay the mortgage, and soon won’t have a home My stomach is so hungry, it’s waiting for a meal The dumpster is in lockdown, I cannot break the seal The lottery that I didn’t win, The slot machine was cold The metal detector’s on the brink, I can’t find any gold The foodbank was depleted, the soup kitchen was closed The shelter overloaded, the sidewalk overflowed Comcast just around the block, I could not connect K-Mart on the boulevard, they had no respect Walmart down the corner, I wasn’t qualified Starbucks full of young adults, middle aged need not apply The hotel was hiring housekeepers, bilingual I was not Hooter’s at the strip mall, I didn’t have a shot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/25/2016 11:25:00 PM
KATE, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:18:00 PM
Bravo Kate: Fantastic and heart breaking poem (I was recently laid-off). Keep writing. PEACE!
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Date: 9/23/2011 3:49:00 PM
like this a lot. so true in this economic climate, even worse in england, people with university degrees cant even get minimum wage jobs. still great poetry, musnt grumble.
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Date: 9/23/2011 3:24:00 PM
Good one Kate. It's nice to see a sense of humor. Tony
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:19:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Kate. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 12:54:00 PM
clever and nicely flowing. i hope i was supposed to see the humor in this, although for many (hopefully, no one you know) this has a lot of truth in it.
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