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Ode To the Mosh Pit!

Lights flashing, people clashing Arms and legs flying everywhere People laughing, having fun Dancing without a care Feeling exhausted, want to rest Have to find a chair Can’t see the band because I have to stand It isn’t fair! Wait a minute, a gap at the front just opened up Got to move fast, got to hurry up If I want to get in there Now my eyes are hurting from the glare of the lights But being this close to the band is such a thrilling delight Seeing them jumping around, hyping up the crowd is such an awesome sight! Let’s hope they keep the crowd rocking into the night As they sing their last song For the final encore I feel sad I’d waited so long to see them But I’m so glad I went along And in a couple of years, they’ll be back once more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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