John Rey Canon Poet Ode

Ode To the Moon

In the night sky there she smiles
Watching lovers from distant miles

After Mr, Sun neglects the world
The gracious moon starts to unfold

Joyful hearts wait the chance
To see the moon spread romance

She’s radiant, sensual, glowing bright,
A witness to bodies fused at night

To lonely hearts, warmth she gives
To broken souls, light she leaves

Could this sparkling jewel in the sky
Be afraid to fall that high?

Oh lovely maiden up above
Does she weep she cannot love?

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2014 at 4:16 AM - A very well written poem, John - I like the end - oxox // Anne-Lise :) John Rey Canon December 3, 2014 at 6:52 PM Thank you Anne. I appreciate.

Casarah Nance July 30, 2014 at 7:28 PM Great ending question to leave the reader wondering! Oh the sun and the moon play their parts so well and you described the moon playing witness to the world so well. Good job. John Rey Canon July 31, 2014 at 3:14 AM Thank you so much Ms. Nance

Jessy David July 30, 2014 at 2:03 AM Nice imagination, John. Sun neglects and lady moon spreads her grace. The last question is heart touching. John Rey Canon July 30, 2014 at 2:07 AM Thank you. it means a lot.