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Poetic Form: Free Verse
Inspired: 2024 January 06

 

*2nd Place*
2024 poem not for contest
Contest Judged: 2024 January 10
Sponsored by: Silent One

 

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Be there a time that flowed the aura 'neath the breadth that holds the weight of thee, does beauty walks atop your sliding granules of trinket feet and painted nails rob few of thee, that once charmed men release their girth and loosen virtue slip through fingers of thee, Of famous men or sum feminine further first, their standing you're a standby is a curse of thee, appointed overseer these belittle that tither the wind to contest and forfeit no choice of thee, stems petalled vibrant fluttering liken grains 'neath pursues to escape yet yours are a part of thee, alluring crafts their will whereas remotely the aloof eyes risks furtherance out and pivot some way of thee, you steer their breaths seductively complete a whiff of ancient's potent secrecy projects the chasm of thee, you comprehend being alone and of what brews lacking its realm where time stands with no hands to a clock mocks of thee, the colors constant fetching commands acclaim, award, a look-see, and of the sky from the sun's set to rise, be the same of thee, free to count the exact stars cool of the moon and the sun's heat the four winds cast no eyes but you sway to their glory of thee, you are priceless as indifference be of no virtue or vice the words I write of you do not go through you, but is, as it should be, ... of thee.

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Date: 1/11/2024 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/11/2024 10:27:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, good of you to visit me with your kind words. Aloha, William
Date: 1/10/2024 11:48:00 AM
A most beautiful ode my friend.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/10/2024 12:16:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. As this Ode earmarked seemingly to Sara, I suppose I could shoot the The Mark to Brian. Aloha, William
Date: 1/7/2024 4:14:00 PM
Outstanding Ode to a Desert Flower, William. It's truly a masterpiece that captures the essence and beauty of desert flowers via your imagery. For many years, I lived and worked in the Chihuahuan desert. I marveled at how they stood alone, enduring all the seasons but remained beautiful. I found them inspirationa. Have to fave this one, have a great week, Sara
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/7/2024 4:37:00 PM
Oh, Oui mon cherie, my Texas blossom from whence ye hail, Sara. Forgive my absence, and my Cheers for said Fave of this, my dear friend. Aloha, William
Date: 1/7/2024 8:41:00 AM
Your poem is exquisitely crafted, showcasing a diverse range of vivid imagery. It artfully merges the splendor of nature with profound emotions, resulting in a captivating ode to the desert flower, William.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, my Philly friend. I wrote this and a few more yesterday--glad to be back, my friend. Aloha, William.
Date: 1/7/2024 5:49:00 AM
A beautiful blend of nature's beauty and emotions. Lovely ode to desert flower, William.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:56:00 AM
I posted--oh well, Vijay--a glitch I suppose. Thanks for your post, visit are of equal value to the welcoming side of me, my friend. Aloha, William

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