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Ode To Six Lines

*********************** To write six lines of smiles I'll find a treat, for my best friend, nature, in spring, a joy! Birds sing, bring cheer, new life, alleluia! Small bird, the Jenny wren, full of gusto! Will bring a smile to your face, his volume! He sings for the world, six lines, in good taste! **********************
When line SIX is a perfect FIX. Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Silent One 06/18/2018

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Date: 6/23/2018 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Mick, beautiful imagery and the graph :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:21:00 PM
Such a unique and ingenious presentation for such glorious poetry, Mick. Congratulations on your wonderful win! ~Susan
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/23/2018 5:54:00 PM
Many thanks, Susan, appreciated, Mick
Date: 6/22/2018 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with these clever six lines. :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/23/2018 5:54:00 PM
Many thanks, Susan, appreciated, Mick
Date: 6/22/2018 7:40:00 AM
Quite cunning. Congrats on your placement, Mick.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/23/2018 5:55:00 PM
Many thanks, Moon Flower, appreciated, Mick
Date: 6/20/2018 7:04:00 PM
Innovative, ingenious presentation, Mick: A real conversation piece, this one... Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/23/2018 5:56:00 PM
Many thanks, Gershon, appreciated, Mick
Date: 6/20/2018 6:50:00 PM
- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Mick :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/23/2018 5:57:00 PM
I bet he enjoyed every second of it :-) Many thanks, Sunshine Smile, appreciated, Mick
Date: 6/20/2018 3:52:00 PM
Great ode Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/23/2018 5:58:00 PM
Many thanks, Silent, appreciated, Mick
Date: 6/18/2018 1:49:00 AM
Interesting piece. I do love writing in iambic pentameter. It's beautiful to feel spring blooming in these lines. Good luck in the contest.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/18/2018 8:59:00 AM
Many thanks, Eileen, fingers crossed! Mick

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