Mick Talbot Poet Iambic Pentameter

Ode To Six Lines

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To write six lines of smiles I'll find a treat,
for my best friend, nature, in spring, a joy!
Birds sing, bring cheer, new life, alleluia!
Small bird, the Jenny wren, full of gusto!
Will bring a smile to your face, his volume!
He sings for the world, six lines, in good taste! 
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When line SIX is a perfect FIX. Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Silent One

06/18/2018

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Eve Roper June 23, 2018 at 8:54 PM Congratulations on your great win, Mick, beautiful imagery and the graph :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Ashley June 23, 2018 at 4:21 PM Such a unique and ingenious presentation for such glorious poetry, Mick. Congratulations on your wonderful win! ~Susan Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 5:54 PM Many thanks, Susan, appreciated, Mick

Susan Gentry June 22, 2018 at 8:57 PM Congratulations on your win with these clever six lines. :) Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 5:54 PM Many thanks, Susan, appreciated, Mick

Moon Flower June 22, 2018 at 7:40 AM Quite cunning. Congrats on your placement, Mick. Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 5:55 PM Many thanks, Moon Flower, appreciated, Mick

Gershon Wolf June 20, 2018 at 7:04 PM Innovative, ingenious presentation, Mick: A real conversation piece, this one... Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 5:56 PM Many thanks, Gershon, appreciated, Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2018 at 6:50 PM - A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Mick :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :) Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 5:57 PM I bet he enjoyed every second of it :-) Many thanks, Sunshine Smile, appreciated, Mick

Silent One June 20, 2018 at 3:52 PM Great ode Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Mick Talbot June 23, 2018 at 5:58 PM Many thanks, Silent, appreciated, Mick

Eileen Manassian June 18, 2018 at 1:49 AM Interesting piece. I do love writing in iambic pentameter. It's beautiful to feel spring blooming in these lines. Good luck in the contest. Mick Talbot June 18, 2018 at 8:59 AM Many thanks, Eileen, fingers crossed! Mick