Ode to 'Palatial Estates'

~ PALATIAL ESTATES ~ ponies… waterfalls… rainbows… ... pickleball... wrecked... all

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/16/2025 6:51:00 AM

Pickleball reduced the snobbery of tennis, perhaps…lol…I don’t know. I’d rather play tennis, however I can’t even take a walk with grave pain, at the moment…hopefully epidural will do the trick. Love your first dreamy line. I only get to visit those palatial palaces…temporarily love the scenery.

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/16/2025 6:40:00 AM

Not certain of your reference here...but...some are indeed better gone. Gotten by theft and murder. But, hard-work, honestly earned should have no limits.